Here's a piece of it.
Is it interesting and is it going anywhere?
May could not have come fast enough for the budding group of departing seniors from Colford University. On an evening where the euphoric skyline that draped over the jubilant grads stood still in a blend of blue and tangerine, the day was about to retire into the evening twilight. For the numerous students who packed commuter vans and walked in groups averaging 3-5, their nights were just beginning.
Most were ready to let their hair down after a tumultuous month of papers, exams, and research studies. Among the gallery of white baseball caps, oversized cups and domesticated cackling, stood well known attendees at an off-campus mixer. Ellie Bowden and her group of girlfriends comprised that list. Ellie and her girls were checking out the scenery, as they had so succinctly put into their efforts of meeting men of legitimate dating material.
Across the way, Brendan Rainer had his sights set on the 5’7 tawny-haired bombshell her mother affectionately refers to as 'A little Ellie-fish, about to enter the big pond of life'.
Wearing a striped, button-down shirt, draped onto dreary denim jeans, and parted black hair and sideburns Brenden has had his ups-and-downs with the girl department. To his chagrin, although he valued and respected women, it has most often proved to be his Achilles heel as far as his love life was concerned. He was usually the best friend and he had long since tired of that image. Him and his buddies were also on hand kicking back in the corner and conversing. Was Ellie Bowden out of his league? Maybe. But then again, he had his gameface on. Nothing was going to stand in his way, except for two Capri-sporting, sandal-wearing, necklaced girls who got his attention first.
In the traditional sense, Brendan and Ellie came from opposite sides of the tracks. In lieu of their social standing, neither lacked drive. Besides, they were graduating college next week, so things should even out smoothly.
Early afternoon, Brendan woke up from a semi-drunken stupor to the hammering of the door from his father Don. Right off the bat the everso blunt, yet overprotective old man of the Rainers look his son square in the eye with a sentiment of Son, we need to talk.’ For Brendan this was all too routine. Had it been a cd that lain next to his hundreds of music tapes, a more fitting title of his father's speech would be The Best of Mr. Rainer’s Bullshit Lectures: Volume 1, available in both Stressful and Unnecessary.. Brendan cared much for his parents although he sought to find his own identity in his 4 years of Colford. His mother Beverly was the first to hug the first of the clan to have done anything productive past high school. She and her husband were high school sweethearts who married into their early 20s and raised Brendan when they were relatively anew to their own existence. Over the years, they had gone out of their way to bond with their kid over a variety of topics, ranging from learning to balance his own check book to sex. Brendan beyond hoped it would not be one of those talks.. Admittedly enough his estrangement from his parents at a young age was not something that would deter his parents from doing their part in raising his son with some semblance of integrity and standard. That did not always stay in tact once Brendan started his freshman year, but then again so didn't his laundry habits.
How you been, dad?,” Brendan asked with heavy eyes and semi-combed hair carrying a heaping helping of a month's worth of wardrobe.
Just bring in the rest of your bags---you know your mom and I really missed you.”
He put on weight, Don,” Beverly chimed.
“I doubt that, honey.”
It's been a while since you been at school, and.we're going to have to ask that you switch to living in the basement or possibly moving out,” his father relayed passively.
What the hell?,” Brendan stood dumbfounded. He looked to his mother with a glance in his eye seeking approval if she would be too put off that he curse up a storm. It would not be the first time.
what about MY room, ma ?”
“Look son, we know this has been a hard pill to swallow but things haven’t been on the up and up at work,” his father retorted. “And ever since we came here her and I have had a hard enough time getting aid to put your brother and sister through school. That’s what it is, Brendan. I’m sorry.”
The middle child of the family was feeling like the forgotten one as he buried his head in his hands with an animated grunt and galloped upstairs before getting the attention of his mother. “Bren, we did keep your stuff downstairs,” his mother proclaimed to her defeated son, in a tone resembling a game show announcer letting a contestant know they had still won the complimentary parting prize.
"What the hell is that about, man?," was the initial reaction from his buddy Dennis. "I dunno, they're being weird. But maybe it's for the better," Brendan nonchalantly quipped as he drew devil horns around stick figures emulating his folks.Brendan was a drawer who also liked to write. Since artists who occasionally penned was not a solid major, Brendan took side jobs and apprentice work shops after school to hone his passion for drawing. He used to just stick to comic book superheroes until he figured he move on to bigger and better once he hit campus. Plus he did could do without being taunted for it by potential love interests. That night, Brendan and his sentimental entourage of post-collegiate hopeless romantics took to one of Colford Universities popular off-campus dive bars: Chet's. What started out as a series of walks 3 nights a week amid-st tethered finances and the occasionally overdue midterm take home exam, became a car ride into town, feeling like the had taken the wrong turn at the crossroads of their newly-designated roles in society: Rookie real worlders.
Ellie Bowden felt a sense of loss when she had trouble finding a full-time job after graduating with a degree in finance. She was very involved on campus and was a tri-star athlete who excelled in the class, and definitely knew how to have a good time in between and around her endeavors. At times overly conscientious of her looks, Ellie would tussle her strand of tawny-brown locks and bat her green eyes, along with soft lips and a diamond necklace she wore in tribute to her grandmother. Ellie was a family person at heart. Although she felt she may have done some things at college she may not have done after finishing school, nor necessarily felt proud of Ellie sported lots of energy and personality aside from her good looks. She was also not one to take lightly in terns of pulling the wool over her eyes. Months after finishing school, Ellie took notice of how infrequent she would see her friends from high school, let alone some of her suite mates she had been tight with since her sophomore year.
Ellie had her "return nights" at Colford but it was not the same. New faces, new crowd, new drama. Same old routine. Brendan felt similar at his guys night out at Chet's, sitting at the bar watching ESPN parallel to older townsfolk who sported Keno tickets and cigars. His and Shawn and their friends of their old roommates sat awkwardly ajar a storm of spilt drinks and camera flashes. That night, Ellie babysat for her neighbors, but instead of chatting up with some of her old teammates plastered on her cell phone directory, she brought over a scrap book and glossed over it since one of the pages had a congratulations card that said "Here's Looking at you Kid", and had a baby emblazoned on the front. Ellie wanted children of her own somebody, but finding Mr. Right was not something she took lightly, especially when many of the men who had flirted up a storm toward her at Chet's two nights a week back in her final semester were old enough to be her uncle...literally. She was still her mother's princess, her 'Ellie-fish in a pond.' And it really annoyed her with a passion. Though she loved her mother, she wasn't quite ready to take on a role as a 12-year old girl trapped in a young woman's body. Bickering ensued and Ellie's trip to Key West on Spring Break was now rivaled by bickering over keeping her room picked up.
Six months after the homestretch of senior year winded down, talk show reruns and Gelato proved stale to Ellie--a determined post-collegiate, who had sent out hundreds of resumes but ended up getting called off of most jobs she went for. Temping and waitressing to support herself, aside from the clothes store she clamored at since high school, Ellie got the occasional pep talk of others who hated their jobs and ask that someone with as much potential as her break out of her rut and exit their self-proclaimed retail hell. Then she remembered that her time would come in spite of the prominent mentality that who you are replicates what you make of it. Brendan contributed to several on-line magazines to pad his amateur resume, but nothing that paid off his student loans. Characteristically, those that are fortunate---and there are usually a lot of people, who receive their degrees and get into their fields, were on the opposite of Brendan who had since come to feel that he did not know what the hell he wanted to do with his life. Even though he had not needed much of his parents help when he lived on campus, he commonly never turned it down when offered. Truth be told, both of Colford's fresh new representatives in finding themselves after dusk has overcast their dawn of post-adolescence-- alongside the always prominent 'we're not kids anymore, now what?!' mentality were pawns of the separation anxiety that thrusted what was set to be the crossroads of their journey into their mid-twenties. Both were hard workers, but each had their own parental sparring and runaround responses from job recruiters that they were not quite preparing to see, but were not immune to. The determination and long term goals of each had long since been compromised and their morales were declining.
Brendan stayed around town and frequented the basement aside from his parent's garage. He had grown to adjust to the independence he had long hoped for, but never expected--particularly in the fashion in which it was first introduced months prior. At a New Year's Eve party took out to the patio at Dennis's apartment, an epiphany struck Brendan Rainer, two years removed from his five-year plight of early class, 3am pizza deliveries and the occasional practical joke by his hallway mates. He had come to realize that would likely never happen again, though he could still sing a mean Tom Petty song using a beer bottle as a microphone when playing guitar that night.
Looking back at that time of a college grad's life where the fun and glory of finding yourself on your own, 8 months at a time proved to be overly gratuitous and sentimental. Things would not be the same for either but then there were the inevitabilities of getting older that was also on deck in their own ambiguous agendas.
Then again, there is always grad school.
Can anyone give me an honest opinion of my short story?
As I started to read it, I had a hard time dodging the massive chunks or big words. they're piled all over the place. Spread them out a little thinner, like warm butter on bread. let your words flow freely and less complicated. Write a little more like you talk. I love it when ppl do that. You have a good story going, but I got lost a bit too. Explain the atmosphere a little more, so your reader can feel more at home and follow effortlessly. You've really put alot of work into this, and I congratulate you. Keep it up and don't quit!:)
Tuesday, November 17, 2009
Can someone please give me an honest assessment on my short story?
Here's a piece of it.
Is it interesting and is it going anywhere?
May could not have come fast enough for the budding group of departing seniors from Colford University. On an evening where the euphoric skyline that draped over the jubilant grads stood still in a blend of blue and tangerine, the day was about to retire into the evening twilight. For the numerous students who packed commuter vans and walked in groups averaging 3-5, their nights were just beginning.
Most were ready to let their hair down after a tumultuous month of papers, exams, and research studies. Among the gallery of white baseball caps, oversized cups and domesticated cackling, stood well known attendees at an off-campus mixer. Ellie Bowden and her group of girlfriends comprised that list. Ellie and her girls were checking out the scenery, as they had so succinctly put into their efforts of meeting men of legitimate dating material.
Across the way, Brendan Rainer had his sights set on the 5’7 tawny-haired bombshell her mother affectionately refers to as 'A little Ellie-fish, about to enter the big pond of life'.
Wearing a striped, button-down shirt, draped onto dreary denim jeans, and parted black hair and sideburns Brenden has had his ups-and-downs with the girl department. To his chagrin, although he valued and respected women, it has most often proved to be his Achilles heel as far as his love life was concerned. He was usually the best friend and he had long since tired of that image. Him and his buddies were also on hand kicking back in the corner and conversing. Was Ellie Bowden out of his league? Maybe. But then again, he had his gameface on. Nothing was going to stand in his way, except for two Capri-sporting, sandal-wearing, necklaced girls who got his attention first.
In the traditional sense, Brendan and Ellie came from opposite sides of the tracks. In lieu of their social standing, neither lacked drive. Besides, they were graduating college next week, so things should even out smoothly.
Early afternoon, Brendan woke up from a semi-drunken stupor to the hammering of the door from his father Don. Right off the bat the everso blunt, yet overprotective old man of the Rainers look his son square in the eye with a sentiment of Son, we need to talk.’ For Brendan this was all too routine. Had it been a cd that lain next to his hundreds of music tapes, a more fitting title of his father's speech would be The Best of Mr. Rainer’s Bullshit Lectures: Volume 1, available in both Stressful and Unnecessary.. Brendan cared much for his parents although he sought to find his own identity in his 4 years of Colford. His mother Beverly was the first to hug the first of the clan to have done anything productive past high school. She and her husband were high school sweethearts who married into their early 20s and raised Brendan when they were relatively anew to their own existence. Over the years, they had gone out of their way to bond with their kid over a variety of topics, ranging from learning to balance his own check book to sex. Brendan beyond hoped it would not be one of those talks.. Admittedly enough his estrangement from his parents at a young age was not something that would deter his parents from doing their part in raising his son with some semblance of integrity and standard. That did not always stay in tact once Brendan started his freshman year, but then again so didn't his laundry habits.
How you been, dad?,” Brendan asked with heavy eyes and semi-combed hair carrying a heaping helping of a month's worth of wardrobe.
Just bring in the rest of your bags---you know your mom and I really missed you.”
He put on weight, Don,” Beverly chimed.
“I doubt that, honey.”
It's been a while since you been at school, and.we're going to have to ask that you switch to living in the basement or possibly moving out,” his father relayed passively.
What the hell?,” Brendan stood dumbfounded. He looked to his mother with a glance in his eye seeking approval if she would be too put off that he curse up a storm. It would not be the first time.
what about MY room, ma ?”
“Look son, we know this has been a hard pill to swallow but things haven’t been on the up and up at work,” his father retorted. “And ever since we came here her and I have had a hard enough time getting aid to put your brother and sister through school. That’s what it is, Brendan. I’m sorry.”
The middle child of the family was feeling like the forgotten one as he buried his head in his hands with an animated grunt and galloped upstairs before getting the attention of his mother. “Bren, we did keep your stuff downstairs,” his mother proclaimed to her defeated son, in a tone resembling a game show announcer letting a contestant know they had still won the complimentary parting prize.
"What the hell is that about, man?," was the initial reaction from his buddy Dennis. "I dunno, they're being weird. But maybe it's for the better," Brendan nonchalantly quipped as he drew devil horns around stick figures emulating his folks.Brendan was a drawer who also liked to write. Since artists who occasionally penned was not a solid major, Brendan took side jobs and apprentice work shops after school to hone his passion for drawing. He used to just stick to comic book superheroes until he figured he move on to bigger and better once he hit campus. Plus he did could do without being taunted for it by potential love interests. That night, Brendan and his sentimental entourage of post-collegiate hopeless romantics took to one of Colford Universities popular off-campus dive bars: Chet's. What started out as a series of walks 3 nights a week amid-st tethered finances and the occasionally overdue midterm take home exam, became a car ride into town, feeling like the had taken the wrong turn at the crossroads of their newly-designated roles in society: Rookie real worlders.
Ellie Bowden felt a sense of loss when she had trouble finding a full-time job after graduating with a degree in finance. She was very involved on campus and was a tri-star athlete who excelled in the class, and definitely knew how to have a good time in between and around her endeavors. At times overly conscientious of her looks, Ellie would tussle her strand of tawny-brown locks and bat her green eyes, along with soft lips and a diamond necklace she wore in tribute to her grandmother. Ellie was a family person at heart. Although she felt she may have done some things at college she may not have done after finishing school, nor necessarily felt proud of Ellie sported lots of energy and personality aside from her good looks. She was also not one to take lightly in terns of pulling the wool over her eyes. Months after finishing school, Ellie took notice of how infrequent she would see her friends from high school, let alone some of her suite mates she had been tight with since her sophomore year.
Ellie had her "return nights" at Colford but it was not the same. New faces, new crowd, new drama. Same old routine. Brendan felt similar at his guys night out at Chet's, sitting at the bar watching ESPN parallel to older townsfolk who sported Keno tickets and cigars. His and Shawn and their friends of their old roommates sat awkwardly ajar a storm of spilt drinks and camera flashes. That night, Ellie babysat for her neighbors, but instead of chatting up with some of her old teammates plastered on her cell phone directory, she brought over a scrap book and glossed over it since one of the pages had a congratulations card that said "Here's Looking at you Kid", and had a baby emblazoned on the front. Ellie wanted children of her own somebody, but finding Mr. Right was not something she took lightly, especially when many of the men who had flirted up a storm toward her at Chet's two nights a week back in her final semester were old enough to be her uncle...literally. She was still her mother's princess, her 'Ellie-fish in a pond.' And it really annoyed her with a passion. Though she loved her mother, she wasn't quite ready to take on a role as a 12-year old girl trapped in a young woman's body. Bickering ensued and Ellie's trip to Key West on Spring Break was now rivaled by bickering over keeping her room picked up.
Six months after the homestretch of senior year winded down, talk show reruns and Gelato proved stale to Ellie--a determined post-collegiate, who had sent out hundreds of resumes but ended up getting called off of most jobs she went for. Temping and waitressing to support herself, aside from the clothes store she clamored at since high school, Ellie got the occasional pep talk of others who hated their jobs and ask that someone with as much potential as her break out of her rut and exit their self-proclaimed retail hell. Then she remembered that her time would come in spite of the prominent mentality that who you are replicates what you make of it. Brendan contributed to several on-line magazines to pad his amateur resume, but nothing that paid off his student loans. Characteristically, those that are fortunate---and there are usually a lot of people, who receive their degrees and get into their fields, were on the opposite of Brendan who had since come to feel that he did not know what the hell he wanted to do with his life. Even though he had not needed much of his parents help when he lived on campus, he commonly never turned it down when offered. Truth be told, both of Colford's fresh new representatives in finding themselves after dusk has overcast their dawn of post-adolescence-- alongside the always prominent 'we're not kids anymore, now what?!' mentality were pawns of the separation anxiety that thrusted what was set to be the crossroads of their journey into their mid-twenties. Both were hard workers, but each had their own parental sparring and runaround responses from job recruiters that they were not quite preparing to see, but were not immune to. The determination and long term goals of each had long since been compromised and their morales were declining.
Brendan stayed around town and frequented the basement aside from his parent's garage. He had grown to adjust to the independence he had long hoped for, but never expected--particularly in the fashion in which it was first introduced months prior. At a New Year's Eve party took out to the patio at Dennis's apartment, an epiphany struck Brendan Rainer, two years removed from his five-year plight of early class, 3am pizza deliveries and the occasional practical joke by his hallway mates. He had come to realize that would likely never happen again, though he could still sing a mean Tom Petty song using a beer bottle as a microphone when playing guitar that night.
Looking back at that time of a college grad's life where the fun and glory of finding yourself on your own, 8 months at a time proved to be overly gratuitous and sentimental. Things would not be the same for either but then there were the inevitabilities of getting older that was also on deck in their own ambiguous agendas.
Then again, there is always grad school.
Can someone please give me an honest assessment on my short story?
i like it
great characters
i am in grade 12 and am dreading growing up, i like the cynical view, it is refreshing
if i had to find something i didn't like much it would be sometimes the language sounds like the author is trying to put in deep adjectives for the sake of it, i am not sure if they are necessary
"euphoric skyline that draped over the jubilant grads"
it sounds good but i would personally use more simple language
if i made a magazine, i would put this in it
and if the story was in a magazine, i would buy it
Reply:I gave up after the third paragraph. Your over-use of fancy adjectives and other "fine writing" is typical of many new authors, and can be cured. But it puts most readers right OFF! Report Abuse
Reply:There is potential here. If you are truly passionate about writing, willing to be rejected many times before being accepted, and have perseverance then study writing and work on your story. Best Wishes! Report Abuse
Reply:Before you write story, be guided from :Author Assist.com; also Writer's Digest, Timothy Hallinan com. Know about plot, setting, 3 structure of a story to make it easy. by just looking your masterpiece, you have almost same length of paragraph that even essay needs pattern. good luck.
Reply:You must have pleasure in expressing your short-living incidents which will be a permanent source of happyness and enjoyment..go on writing - preserve the memento of your personal pleasure .
Reply:ya next time u want someone to answer something don't do this it is not worth it.
Reply:first of all it a long story and it has no meaning go back and try again and this time make it short.
Is it interesting and is it going anywhere?
May could not have come fast enough for the budding group of departing seniors from Colford University. On an evening where the euphoric skyline that draped over the jubilant grads stood still in a blend of blue and tangerine, the day was about to retire into the evening twilight. For the numerous students who packed commuter vans and walked in groups averaging 3-5, their nights were just beginning.
Most were ready to let their hair down after a tumultuous month of papers, exams, and research studies. Among the gallery of white baseball caps, oversized cups and domesticated cackling, stood well known attendees at an off-campus mixer. Ellie Bowden and her group of girlfriends comprised that list. Ellie and her girls were checking out the scenery, as they had so succinctly put into their efforts of meeting men of legitimate dating material.
Across the way, Brendan Rainer had his sights set on the 5’7 tawny-haired bombshell her mother affectionately refers to as 'A little Ellie-fish, about to enter the big pond of life'.
Wearing a striped, button-down shirt, draped onto dreary denim jeans, and parted black hair and sideburns Brenden has had his ups-and-downs with the girl department. To his chagrin, although he valued and respected women, it has most often proved to be his Achilles heel as far as his love life was concerned. He was usually the best friend and he had long since tired of that image. Him and his buddies were also on hand kicking back in the corner and conversing. Was Ellie Bowden out of his league? Maybe. But then again, he had his gameface on. Nothing was going to stand in his way, except for two Capri-sporting, sandal-wearing, necklaced girls who got his attention first.
In the traditional sense, Brendan and Ellie came from opposite sides of the tracks. In lieu of their social standing, neither lacked drive. Besides, they were graduating college next week, so things should even out smoothly.
Early afternoon, Brendan woke up from a semi-drunken stupor to the hammering of the door from his father Don. Right off the bat the everso blunt, yet overprotective old man of the Rainers look his son square in the eye with a sentiment of Son, we need to talk.’ For Brendan this was all too routine. Had it been a cd that lain next to his hundreds of music tapes, a more fitting title of his father's speech would be The Best of Mr. Rainer’s Bullshit Lectures: Volume 1, available in both Stressful and Unnecessary.. Brendan cared much for his parents although he sought to find his own identity in his 4 years of Colford. His mother Beverly was the first to hug the first of the clan to have done anything productive past high school. She and her husband were high school sweethearts who married into their early 20s and raised Brendan when they were relatively anew to their own existence. Over the years, they had gone out of their way to bond with their kid over a variety of topics, ranging from learning to balance his own check book to sex. Brendan beyond hoped it would not be one of those talks.. Admittedly enough his estrangement from his parents at a young age was not something that would deter his parents from doing their part in raising his son with some semblance of integrity and standard. That did not always stay in tact once Brendan started his freshman year, but then again so didn't his laundry habits.
How you been, dad?,” Brendan asked with heavy eyes and semi-combed hair carrying a heaping helping of a month's worth of wardrobe.
Just bring in the rest of your bags---you know your mom and I really missed you.”
He put on weight, Don,” Beverly chimed.
“I doubt that, honey.”
It's been a while since you been at school, and.we're going to have to ask that you switch to living in the basement or possibly moving out,” his father relayed passively.
What the hell?,” Brendan stood dumbfounded. He looked to his mother with a glance in his eye seeking approval if she would be too put off that he curse up a storm. It would not be the first time.
what about MY room, ma ?”
“Look son, we know this has been a hard pill to swallow but things haven’t been on the up and up at work,” his father retorted. “And ever since we came here her and I have had a hard enough time getting aid to put your brother and sister through school. That’s what it is, Brendan. I’m sorry.”
The middle child of the family was feeling like the forgotten one as he buried his head in his hands with an animated grunt and galloped upstairs before getting the attention of his mother. “Bren, we did keep your stuff downstairs,” his mother proclaimed to her defeated son, in a tone resembling a game show announcer letting a contestant know they had still won the complimentary parting prize.
"What the hell is that about, man?," was the initial reaction from his buddy Dennis. "I dunno, they're being weird. But maybe it's for the better," Brendan nonchalantly quipped as he drew devil horns around stick figures emulating his folks.Brendan was a drawer who also liked to write. Since artists who occasionally penned was not a solid major, Brendan took side jobs and apprentice work shops after school to hone his passion for drawing. He used to just stick to comic book superheroes until he figured he move on to bigger and better once he hit campus. Plus he did could do without being taunted for it by potential love interests. That night, Brendan and his sentimental entourage of post-collegiate hopeless romantics took to one of Colford Universities popular off-campus dive bars: Chet's. What started out as a series of walks 3 nights a week amid-st tethered finances and the occasionally overdue midterm take home exam, became a car ride into town, feeling like the had taken the wrong turn at the crossroads of their newly-designated roles in society: Rookie real worlders.
Ellie Bowden felt a sense of loss when she had trouble finding a full-time job after graduating with a degree in finance. She was very involved on campus and was a tri-star athlete who excelled in the class, and definitely knew how to have a good time in between and around her endeavors. At times overly conscientious of her looks, Ellie would tussle her strand of tawny-brown locks and bat her green eyes, along with soft lips and a diamond necklace she wore in tribute to her grandmother. Ellie was a family person at heart. Although she felt she may have done some things at college she may not have done after finishing school, nor necessarily felt proud of Ellie sported lots of energy and personality aside from her good looks. She was also not one to take lightly in terns of pulling the wool over her eyes. Months after finishing school, Ellie took notice of how infrequent she would see her friends from high school, let alone some of her suite mates she had been tight with since her sophomore year.
Ellie had her "return nights" at Colford but it was not the same. New faces, new crowd, new drama. Same old routine. Brendan felt similar at his guys night out at Chet's, sitting at the bar watching ESPN parallel to older townsfolk who sported Keno tickets and cigars. His and Shawn and their friends of their old roommates sat awkwardly ajar a storm of spilt drinks and camera flashes. That night, Ellie babysat for her neighbors, but instead of chatting up with some of her old teammates plastered on her cell phone directory, she brought over a scrap book and glossed over it since one of the pages had a congratulations card that said "Here's Looking at you Kid", and had a baby emblazoned on the front. Ellie wanted children of her own somebody, but finding Mr. Right was not something she took lightly, especially when many of the men who had flirted up a storm toward her at Chet's two nights a week back in her final semester were old enough to be her uncle...literally. She was still her mother's princess, her 'Ellie-fish in a pond.' And it really annoyed her with a passion. Though she loved her mother, she wasn't quite ready to take on a role as a 12-year old girl trapped in a young woman's body. Bickering ensued and Ellie's trip to Key West on Spring Break was now rivaled by bickering over keeping her room picked up.
Six months after the homestretch of senior year winded down, talk show reruns and Gelato proved stale to Ellie--a determined post-collegiate, who had sent out hundreds of resumes but ended up getting called off of most jobs she went for. Temping and waitressing to support herself, aside from the clothes store she clamored at since high school, Ellie got the occasional pep talk of others who hated their jobs and ask that someone with as much potential as her break out of her rut and exit their self-proclaimed retail hell. Then she remembered that her time would come in spite of the prominent mentality that who you are replicates what you make of it. Brendan contributed to several on-line magazines to pad his amateur resume, but nothing that paid off his student loans. Characteristically, those that are fortunate---and there are usually a lot of people, who receive their degrees and get into their fields, were on the opposite of Brendan who had since come to feel that he did not know what the hell he wanted to do with his life. Even though he had not needed much of his parents help when he lived on campus, he commonly never turned it down when offered. Truth be told, both of Colford's fresh new representatives in finding themselves after dusk has overcast their dawn of post-adolescence-- alongside the always prominent 'we're not kids anymore, now what?!' mentality were pawns of the separation anxiety that thrusted what was set to be the crossroads of their journey into their mid-twenties. Both were hard workers, but each had their own parental sparring and runaround responses from job recruiters that they were not quite preparing to see, but were not immune to. The determination and long term goals of each had long since been compromised and their morales were declining.
Brendan stayed around town and frequented the basement aside from his parent's garage. He had grown to adjust to the independence he had long hoped for, but never expected--particularly in the fashion in which it was first introduced months prior. At a New Year's Eve party took out to the patio at Dennis's apartment, an epiphany struck Brendan Rainer, two years removed from his five-year plight of early class, 3am pizza deliveries and the occasional practical joke by his hallway mates. He had come to realize that would likely never happen again, though he could still sing a mean Tom Petty song using a beer bottle as a microphone when playing guitar that night.
Looking back at that time of a college grad's life where the fun and glory of finding yourself on your own, 8 months at a time proved to be overly gratuitous and sentimental. Things would not be the same for either but then there were the inevitabilities of getting older that was also on deck in their own ambiguous agendas.
Then again, there is always grad school.
Can someone please give me an honest assessment on my short story?
i like it
great characters
i am in grade 12 and am dreading growing up, i like the cynical view, it is refreshing
if i had to find something i didn't like much it would be sometimes the language sounds like the author is trying to put in deep adjectives for the sake of it, i am not sure if they are necessary
"euphoric skyline that draped over the jubilant grads"
it sounds good but i would personally use more simple language
if i made a magazine, i would put this in it
and if the story was in a magazine, i would buy it
Reply:I gave up after the third paragraph. Your over-use of fancy adjectives and other "fine writing" is typical of many new authors, and can be cured. But it puts most readers right OFF! Report Abuse
Reply:There is potential here. If you are truly passionate about writing, willing to be rejected many times before being accepted, and have perseverance then study writing and work on your story. Best Wishes! Report Abuse
Reply:Before you write story, be guided from :Author Assist.com; also Writer's Digest, Timothy Hallinan com. Know about plot, setting, 3 structure of a story to make it easy. by just looking your masterpiece, you have almost same length of paragraph that even essay needs pattern. good luck.
Reply:You must have pleasure in expressing your short-living incidents which will be a permanent source of happyness and enjoyment..go on writing - preserve the memento of your personal pleasure .
Reply:ya next time u want someone to answer something don't do this it is not worth it.
Reply:first of all it a long story and it has no meaning go back and try again and this time make it short.
I'm attempting to make a romantic "mix CD" for my boyfriend.?
Yes, it is lame. I care not.
Anyways, some of the bands he listed that he likes on his myspace are:
Panic!at The Disco
UnderOath
Trapt
H.I.M
Avenged Sevenfold
The Used
Blink-182
Papa Roach
3 Doors Down
Breaking Benjamin
Hinder
Atreyu
69Eyes
Pantera
System of a down
Simple Plan
Rise Against
Sevendust
Korn
ColdPlay
Drowning Pool
Eminem
Maroon 5
Green Day
Linkin Park
Nickleback
The Killers
DevilDriver
Azzido Da Bass
Mortal Kombat Techno
Finger Eleven
Crossfade
Slipknot
Staind
Disturbed
Unwritten law
Green Velvet
From Autumn to Ash
And I know of a few bands he likes that arn't listed.
Anyone know of romantic songs from any of those bands, or any romantic songs that would go along with them?
In a moment I'll post a list I've already gathered of potential songs tonight.
Thanks bunches, sincerely!
I'm attempting to make a romantic "mix CD" for my boyfriend.?
sorry I don’t have too many here but it’s a few…
Panic!at The Disco - nine in the afternoon
Blink-182 - going away to college (this is a good one!), another girl another planet, all the small things, roller coaster
Hinder - lips of an angel, better than me
ColdPlay – Viva la vida
Eminem – lets be honest… I don’t think a sweet romantic eminem song exists…
Green Day – I’ll be there, whatsername, good riddance (time of your life)
Nickleback – Photograph, Far Away, Savin’ Me
If you want a few more ideas, theres these: There is by Box Car Racer (side project of blink 182), the great escape by Boys like Girls, with me by Sum 41, when your heart stops beating by +44, light up the sky by, only one, ocean avenue by Yellowcard, Lyla, she’s electric, wonderwall, she is love by oasis.
those are a little like the bands u listed
hope this helps!
Reply:Try this blog- http://letmeplaythemusic.blogspot.com/..... This features songs from different genres that are very good. The best thing about this blog is you can listen to the song and then download it.
Reply:Maroon 5 - Won't Go Home Without You
Nickleback - Photograph
Simple Plan - Untitled
Gareth Gates- Anyone of Us
btw, i think its a sweet thing you're doing for your boyfriend
Reply:relient k--"the best thing"
roller blades
Anyways, some of the bands he listed that he likes on his myspace are:
Panic!at The Disco
UnderOath
Trapt
H.I.M
Avenged Sevenfold
The Used
Blink-182
Papa Roach
3 Doors Down
Breaking Benjamin
Hinder
Atreyu
69Eyes
Pantera
System of a down
Simple Plan
Rise Against
Sevendust
Korn
ColdPlay
Drowning Pool
Eminem
Maroon 5
Green Day
Linkin Park
Nickleback
The Killers
DevilDriver
Azzido Da Bass
Mortal Kombat Techno
Finger Eleven
Crossfade
Slipknot
Staind
Disturbed
Unwritten law
Green Velvet
From Autumn to Ash
And I know of a few bands he likes that arn't listed.
Anyone know of romantic songs from any of those bands, or any romantic songs that would go along with them?
In a moment I'll post a list I've already gathered of potential songs tonight.
Thanks bunches, sincerely!
I'm attempting to make a romantic "mix CD" for my boyfriend.?
sorry I don’t have too many here but it’s a few…
Panic!at The Disco - nine in the afternoon
Blink-182 - going away to college (this is a good one!), another girl another planet, all the small things, roller coaster
Hinder - lips of an angel, better than me
ColdPlay – Viva la vida
Eminem – lets be honest… I don’t think a sweet romantic eminem song exists…
Green Day – I’ll be there, whatsername, good riddance (time of your life)
Nickleback – Photograph, Far Away, Savin’ Me
If you want a few more ideas, theres these: There is by Box Car Racer (side project of blink 182), the great escape by Boys like Girls, with me by Sum 41, when your heart stops beating by +44, light up the sky by, only one, ocean avenue by Yellowcard, Lyla, she’s electric, wonderwall, she is love by oasis.
those are a little like the bands u listed
hope this helps!
Reply:Try this blog- http://letmeplaythemusic.blogspot.com/..... This features songs from different genres that are very good. The best thing about this blog is you can listen to the song and then download it.
Reply:Maroon 5 - Won't Go Home Without You
Nickleback - Photograph
Simple Plan - Untitled
Gareth Gates- Anyone of Us
btw, i think its a sweet thing you're doing for your boyfriend
Reply:relient k--"the best thing"
roller blades
Can u tell me the song name or song artist of these lirics?
well from what i heard it on the radio it went like this. the lirics are not in order btw
breaking my back justs to know your name
when somebody told me you had a boyfriend who looked like..
bring it backdown tonight bring it back down tonight
when all i want to do is try
i got potential
Can u tell me the song name or song artist of these lirics?
somebody told me by the killers! here are the lyrics!
KILLERS LYRICS
Somebody Told Me
Breaking my back just to know your name
Seventeen tracks and I've had it with this game
I'm breaking my back just to know your name
But heaven ain't close in a place like this
Anything goes but don't blink you might miss
Cause heaven ain't close in a place like this
I said heaven ain't close in a place like this
Bring it back down, bring it back down tonight
Never thought I'd let a rumor ruin my moonlight
Well somebody told me
You had a boyfriend
Who looked like a girlfriend
That I had in February of last year
It's not confidential
I've got potential
Ready? Let's roll onto something new
Taking its toll and I'm leaving without you
Cause heaven ain't close in a place like this
I said heaven ain't close in a place like this
Bring it back down, bring it back down tonight
Never thought I'd let a rumor ruin my moonlight
Well somebody told me
You had a boyfriend
Who looked like a girlfriend
That I had in February of last year
It's not confidential
I've got potential
A rushin', a rushin' around
Pace yourself from me
I said maybe baby please
But I just don't know now
When all I wanna do is try
[x3]
Somebody told me
You had a boyfriend
Who looked like a girlfriend
That I had in February of last year
It's not confidential
I've got potential
A rushin', a rushin' around
hope this helped!
Reply:that is "somebody told me" by the killers
Reply:The Killers - Somebody Told Me
Reply:Somebody Told Me - The Killers
Reply:Somebody Told Me by The Killers
You probably already have plenty of answers hehe :)
Reply:Somebody Told Me by The Killers
Reply:KILLERS LYRICS
Somebody Told Me
Breaking my back just to know your name
Seventeen tracks and I've had it with this game
I'm breaking my back just to know your name
But heaven ain't close in a place like this
Anything goes but don't blink you might miss
Cause heaven ain't close in a place like this
I said heaven ain't close in a place like this
Bring it back down, bring it back down tonight
Never thought I'd let a rumor ruin my moonlight
Well somebody told me
You had a boyfriend
Who looked like a girlfriend
That I had in February of last year
It's not confidential
I've got potential
Ready? Let's roll onto something new
Taking its toll and I'm leaving without you
Cause heaven ain't close in a place like this
I said heaven ain't close in a place like this
Bring it back down, bring it back down tonight
Never thought I'd let a rumor ruin my moonlight
Well somebody told me
You had a boyfriend
Who looked like a girlfriend
That I had in February of last year
It's not confidential
I've got potential
A rushin', a rushin' around
Pace yourself from me
I said maybe baby please
But I just don't know now
When all I wanna do is try
[x3]
Somebody told me
You had a boyfriend
Who looked like a girlfriend
That I had in February of last year
It's not confidential
I've got potential
A rushin', a rushin' around
Reply:somebody told me
the killers
Reply:the killers, son!
and the song is called 'somebody told me'
Reply:somebody told me
i think its by the killers
Reply:Somebody told me, The Killers
Reply:"somebody told me" by the killers
Reply:somebody told me by the killers
Reply:it's lyrics not lirics and its somebody told me- the killers
Reply:The killers - Somebody told me.
Reply:It's "Somebody Told Me" by The Killers
Breaking my back just to know your name
Seventeen tracks and I've had it with this game
I'm breaking my back just to know your name
But heaven ain't close in a place like this
Anything goes but don't blink you might miss
Cause heaven ain't close in a place like this
I said heaven ain't close in a place like this
Bring it back down, bring it back down tonight
Never thought I'd let a rumor ruin my moonlight
Well somebody told me
You had a boyfriend
Who looked like a girlfriend
That I had in February of last year
It's not confidential
I've got potential
Ready? Let's roll onto something new
Taking its toll and I'm leaving without you
Cause heaven ain't close in a place like this
I said heaven ain't close in a place like this
Bring it back down, bring it back down tonight
Never thought I'd let a rumor ruin my moonlight
Well somebody told me
You had a boyfriend
Who looked like a girlfriend
That I had in February of last year
It's not confidential
I've got potential
A rushin', a rushin' around
Pace yourself from me
I said maybe baby please
But I just don't know now
When all I wanna do is try
[x3]
Somebody told me
Reply:somebody told me by the killers
breaking my back justs to know your name
when somebody told me you had a boyfriend who looked like..
bring it backdown tonight bring it back down tonight
when all i want to do is try
i got potential
Can u tell me the song name or song artist of these lirics?
somebody told me by the killers! here are the lyrics!
KILLERS LYRICS
Somebody Told Me
Breaking my back just to know your name
Seventeen tracks and I've had it with this game
I'm breaking my back just to know your name
But heaven ain't close in a place like this
Anything goes but don't blink you might miss
Cause heaven ain't close in a place like this
I said heaven ain't close in a place like this
Bring it back down, bring it back down tonight
Never thought I'd let a rumor ruin my moonlight
Well somebody told me
You had a boyfriend
Who looked like a girlfriend
That I had in February of last year
It's not confidential
I've got potential
Ready? Let's roll onto something new
Taking its toll and I'm leaving without you
Cause heaven ain't close in a place like this
I said heaven ain't close in a place like this
Bring it back down, bring it back down tonight
Never thought I'd let a rumor ruin my moonlight
Well somebody told me
You had a boyfriend
Who looked like a girlfriend
That I had in February of last year
It's not confidential
I've got potential
A rushin', a rushin' around
Pace yourself from me
I said maybe baby please
But I just don't know now
When all I wanna do is try
[x3]
Somebody told me
You had a boyfriend
Who looked like a girlfriend
That I had in February of last year
It's not confidential
I've got potential
A rushin', a rushin' around
hope this helped!
Reply:that is "somebody told me" by the killers
Reply:The Killers - Somebody Told Me
Reply:Somebody Told Me - The Killers
Reply:Somebody Told Me by The Killers
You probably already have plenty of answers hehe :)
Reply:Somebody Told Me by The Killers
Reply:KILLERS LYRICS
Somebody Told Me
Breaking my back just to know your name
Seventeen tracks and I've had it with this game
I'm breaking my back just to know your name
But heaven ain't close in a place like this
Anything goes but don't blink you might miss
Cause heaven ain't close in a place like this
I said heaven ain't close in a place like this
Bring it back down, bring it back down tonight
Never thought I'd let a rumor ruin my moonlight
Well somebody told me
You had a boyfriend
Who looked like a girlfriend
That I had in February of last year
It's not confidential
I've got potential
Ready? Let's roll onto something new
Taking its toll and I'm leaving without you
Cause heaven ain't close in a place like this
I said heaven ain't close in a place like this
Bring it back down, bring it back down tonight
Never thought I'd let a rumor ruin my moonlight
Well somebody told me
You had a boyfriend
Who looked like a girlfriend
That I had in February of last year
It's not confidential
I've got potential
A rushin', a rushin' around
Pace yourself from me
I said maybe baby please
But I just don't know now
When all I wanna do is try
[x3]
Somebody told me
You had a boyfriend
Who looked like a girlfriend
That I had in February of last year
It's not confidential
I've got potential
A rushin', a rushin' around
Reply:somebody told me
the killers
Reply:the killers, son!
and the song is called 'somebody told me'
Reply:somebody told me
i think its by the killers
Reply:Somebody told me, The Killers
Reply:"somebody told me" by the killers
Reply:somebody told me by the killers
Reply:it's lyrics not lirics and its somebody told me- the killers
Reply:The killers - Somebody told me.
Reply:It's "Somebody Told Me" by The Killers
Breaking my back just to know your name
Seventeen tracks and I've had it with this game
I'm breaking my back just to know your name
But heaven ain't close in a place like this
Anything goes but don't blink you might miss
Cause heaven ain't close in a place like this
I said heaven ain't close in a place like this
Bring it back down, bring it back down tonight
Never thought I'd let a rumor ruin my moonlight
Well somebody told me
You had a boyfriend
Who looked like a girlfriend
That I had in February of last year
It's not confidential
I've got potential
Ready? Let's roll onto something new
Taking its toll and I'm leaving without you
Cause heaven ain't close in a place like this
I said heaven ain't close in a place like this
Bring it back down, bring it back down tonight
Never thought I'd let a rumor ruin my moonlight
Well somebody told me
You had a boyfriend
Who looked like a girlfriend
That I had in February of last year
It's not confidential
I've got potential
A rushin', a rushin' around
Pace yourself from me
I said maybe baby please
But I just don't know now
When all I wanna do is try
[x3]
Somebody told me
Reply:somebody told me by the killers
Please tell me which songs you like the best that i wrote and do i have potential to be a songwriter?
1. you say im the only girl you wanna be with
that you wouldnt hurt me and go out with some witch
thats when i awnsered a call from another girl
she said to tell you that you were great and that you rocked her world
then you come home wit some perfume i dont own
you start to deny things and tell me to leave you alone
2.sticks and stones may break my bones
but words may never hurt me no more
ive been through the pain been through the sorrow
cried so much as if there was no tommorow
i would wish that my life could be a fantasy
something that aint hard and you can go by easily
Please tell me which songs you like the best that i wrote and do i have potential to be a songwriter?
Song number 2 is pretty good. Well done.
Reply:on your way to becoming a WONDERFUL emo song writer! lol a lot of it really depends on the music you have with it, a song can have great lyrics and be ruined by how the sing it or the instruments the use...so if you do get to be a songwrighter, don't let some one fu.c k it up by having the wrong sound
that you wouldnt hurt me and go out with some witch
thats when i awnsered a call from another girl
she said to tell you that you were great and that you rocked her world
then you come home wit some perfume i dont own
you start to deny things and tell me to leave you alone
2.sticks and stones may break my bones
but words may never hurt me no more
ive been through the pain been through the sorrow
cried so much as if there was no tommorow
i would wish that my life could be a fantasy
something that aint hard and you can go by easily
Please tell me which songs you like the best that i wrote and do i have potential to be a songwriter?
Song number 2 is pretty good. Well done.
Reply:on your way to becoming a WONDERFUL emo song writer! lol a lot of it really depends on the music you have with it, a song can have great lyrics and be ruined by how the sing it or the instruments the use...so if you do get to be a songwrighter, don't let some one fu.c k it up by having the wrong sound
Please tell me what you think of these song lyrics I wrote.?
Be eccentric, be unique be who you want to be.
The door closes.
The night ends.
Moon rises again.
Stars shine under a dark shadow,
and beams through a darkened window,
and we all fall back in to the earth's pattern.
Eyes shut,
Words are short cutted,
Ending the rucus,
Silence train comes our way from, the
rail road of the days events.
We prevent our minds from swinging with the pain that presents itself in our heads.
Little whispers, little whispers there,
Children now snoring dreaming with out a care.
Dreaming of being a part of the earth's future.
Life sleeps, life lives, under this moon, under this nature.
We wake,
We sleep,
We bath,
We eat,
We take,
A break,
with lifes own beat.
The door closes
the day begans.
the suns rises again.
Light shines over trees.
And beams through windows,
onto sleepy cheeks.
Eyes are open,
were coopen
with the future in hand.
The train of a new day, immeditally pushes us ahead.
We get on the bus, or head out to work.
Going to places that we think we were,
Already did this yesterday,
I'm stuck in a routine, and from day to day,
I just need to escape.
Commotion, people talking here.
Children day dreaming with out a care.
Dreaming of being a part of the future.
Life sleeps, life lives, under this sun, under this nature.
Chorus
Sometimes I feel lost.
Like Life just cost to much
to even go on.
But then I see the love,
The focus that is smogged,
the mission that is long,
that potential that we've all got.
Generation come,
Generation go,
Every nation stands,
because of every single man that carries a heavy load.
Family found, or family gone,
living with in this generation,
A nation and a hope found in us all.
Dream to succed, and advanced out of the fog.
Please tell me what you think of these song lyrics I wrote.?
Hi Juefawn...I think your song is very nice...it is hopeful, and positive...also...I don't think it hurts that others have done the same thing...some of the greatest themes in songs are repeated throughout the centuries...people actually like that...it is not a perfect song but is very strong...I think it is good to critique the works of others but I find it repugnant that some do so with such arrogance and cruelty...that apparently gives them some delight...actually humans stopped eating their young a long time ago....
Reply:sound nice..... it really does :)
Reply:i think u need to copyright this b4 it gets stolen....... 4 reals
-_-
cuz its pretty damn good
Reply:It's decent, but I feel like i have heard that before. So many bands sing about the same thing, you need to be just a little more original. But it's a good start.
Reply:when you sing about the sun riseing you should say up again
Reply:this is nothing everyone doesnt know
Reply:it's awesome but, i agree with martini.
i think you ought to delete this song from this site before someone gets there hands on it.
The door closes.
The night ends.
Moon rises again.
Stars shine under a dark shadow,
and beams through a darkened window,
and we all fall back in to the earth's pattern.
Eyes shut,
Words are short cutted,
Ending the rucus,
Silence train comes our way from, the
rail road of the days events.
We prevent our minds from swinging with the pain that presents itself in our heads.
Little whispers, little whispers there,
Children now snoring dreaming with out a care.
Dreaming of being a part of the earth's future.
Life sleeps, life lives, under this moon, under this nature.
We wake,
We sleep,
We bath,
We eat,
We take,
A break,
with lifes own beat.
The door closes
the day begans.
the suns rises again.
Light shines over trees.
And beams through windows,
onto sleepy cheeks.
Eyes are open,
were coopen
with the future in hand.
The train of a new day, immeditally pushes us ahead.
We get on the bus, or head out to work.
Going to places that we think we were,
Already did this yesterday,
I'm stuck in a routine, and from day to day,
I just need to escape.
Commotion, people talking here.
Children day dreaming with out a care.
Dreaming of being a part of the future.
Life sleeps, life lives, under this sun, under this nature.
Chorus
Sometimes I feel lost.
Like Life just cost to much
to even go on.
But then I see the love,
The focus that is smogged,
the mission that is long,
that potential that we've all got.
Generation come,
Generation go,
Every nation stands,
because of every single man that carries a heavy load.
Family found, or family gone,
living with in this generation,
A nation and a hope found in us all.
Dream to succed, and advanced out of the fog.
Please tell me what you think of these song lyrics I wrote.?
Hi Juefawn...I think your song is very nice...it is hopeful, and positive...also...I don't think it hurts that others have done the same thing...some of the greatest themes in songs are repeated throughout the centuries...people actually like that...it is not a perfect song but is very strong...I think it is good to critique the works of others but I find it repugnant that some do so with such arrogance and cruelty...that apparently gives them some delight...actually humans stopped eating their young a long time ago....
Reply:sound nice..... it really does :)
Reply:i think u need to copyright this b4 it gets stolen....... 4 reals
-_-
cuz its pretty damn good
Reply:It's decent, but I feel like i have heard that before. So many bands sing about the same thing, you need to be just a little more original. But it's a good start.
Reply:when you sing about the sun riseing you should say up again
Reply:this is nothing everyone doesnt know
Reply:it's awesome but, i agree with martini.
i think you ought to delete this song from this site before someone gets there hands on it.
10 points! JONAS and AA fans!!!!!!?
10 points to the person who can give me the facts w/ a credible source and link.
when did aj and joe jonas break up?
when did the song 'move on' (jo bros) come out or was sung?
when did the song 'potential breakup song' (aly and aj ) come out?
were there any statements made by joe or aj about why they broke up? state?
if you know the answer to any one of these, please respond. thanks :-).
10 points! JONAS and AA fans!!!!!!?
Aj and Joe broke up sometime in 2006.
The song move on came out in May of 2007.
The potential break up song came out July, 2007
I don't know about why they broke up though
Hope i helped:)
Reply:haha damn... i give up lol
Reply:okkay ime gonna try for this cuz im bored..
joe and aj break up-
http://www.topix.com/forum/city/redmond-...
move one i couldnt reli find that much.-
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/It's_About_...
potential break up song, if your thinking about that like they wrote these about them, i know move on is like oldishh, and i dont think ally and aj write there own lyrics-
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Potential_B...
aj and joe break up-
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pBoAr8J-f...
hope i helped=]
Reply:OMG I COULD CARE LESS ABOUT THE JONAS BRO
Reply:i LOVE jOE AND NICK AND PAUL
Reply:2 be honest i dont know...
Reply:Joe broke up sometime in 2006.
The song move on came out in May of 2007.
The potential break up song came out July, 2007
I don't know about why they broke up though
Reply:OMG!!!! I...... totally don't care
Toothbrush
when did aj and joe jonas break up?
when did the song 'move on' (jo bros) come out or was sung?
when did the song 'potential breakup song' (aly and aj ) come out?
were there any statements made by joe or aj about why they broke up? state?
if you know the answer to any one of these, please respond. thanks :-).
10 points! JONAS and AA fans!!!!!!?
Aj and Joe broke up sometime in 2006.
The song move on came out in May of 2007.
The potential break up song came out July, 2007
I don't know about why they broke up though
Hope i helped:)
Reply:haha damn... i give up lol
Reply:okkay ime gonna try for this cuz im bored..
joe and aj break up-
http://www.topix.com/forum/city/redmond-...
move one i couldnt reli find that much.-
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/It's_About_...
potential break up song, if your thinking about that like they wrote these about them, i know move on is like oldishh, and i dont think ally and aj write there own lyrics-
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Potential_B...
aj and joe break up-
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pBoAr8J-f...
hope i helped=]
Reply:OMG I COULD CARE LESS ABOUT THE JONAS BRO
Reply:i LOVE jOE AND NICK AND PAUL
Reply:2 be honest i dont know...
Reply:Joe broke up sometime in 2006.
The song move on came out in May of 2007.
The potential break up song came out July, 2007
I don't know about why they broke up though
Reply:OMG!!!! I...... totally don't care
Toothbrush
Two Months of Work for Four Lines of Song...?
Ever start working on something... and no matter what, you can't get it right, can't get it to fit?
Well, I put together a nice guitar riff a couple of months ago... and I figured "Well, I should write a song to go with it." I got as far as the first line and couldn't go anywhere with it. Well, this weekend, three more lines came to me. Here's what I have so far, what do you think?
"You... are my disease.
The pain I carry owns me.
A dream... nobody sees.
My broken mannequin queen."
Yup, that's it so far. Does this have potential? Or should I just give up on this?
Two Months of Work for Four Lines of Song...?
I'm in exactly the same rut and it's killing me but the more I try, the harder it becomes to add to it. Relax, have a beer and let your imagination go.........we achieve more when we don't push too hard.
I like it, I think it has potential but remember, as long as it's from within you, you'll make it work!
Reply:I wouldn't say "mannequin queen." That sounds odd or silly. THAT'S JUST MY OPINION.
Reply:its good, see im probrably the only white RnB songwriter and ive done some interesting stuff
keep it up
Reply:it's cool
Reply:If your going for depressing then it works great. Not something I typically listen to though, but I think if you like that sort of thing, it has potential.
**Dont worry about how long it takes to write, master pieces dont usually happen over night. The fact that your taking so long just says your putting your all into it, your dedicated to making it good, and your thoughtful...all good traits! Good luck!!
Reply:let me help u with something.....
when writing a song lyric its much much much harder...then writing poetry...bc somehow u start 2 sing it!right?
1st start writing it as a poem...just write anything,,I mean anything.....even when it doesnt make sence...just write write..
everytime when u hear a word/sentence..just write it..
then later...u check and u correct them...
and u get to choose if u want it as a poem/or a lyric song!
Reply:I can see Adam Sandler singing something like that.
:)
Keep working on it.
you're doing better than me!
Reply:hey whats up o think it has a lot of potential. so keep going never give up on anything. it takes me sometime a long time to wright a poems to the best poems come out from a long time writing it
Well, I put together a nice guitar riff a couple of months ago... and I figured "Well, I should write a song to go with it." I got as far as the first line and couldn't go anywhere with it. Well, this weekend, three more lines came to me. Here's what I have so far, what do you think?
"You... are my disease.
The pain I carry owns me.
A dream... nobody sees.
My broken mannequin queen."
Yup, that's it so far. Does this have potential? Or should I just give up on this?
Two Months of Work for Four Lines of Song...?
I'm in exactly the same rut and it's killing me but the more I try, the harder it becomes to add to it. Relax, have a beer and let your imagination go.........we achieve more when we don't push too hard.
I like it, I think it has potential but remember, as long as it's from within you, you'll make it work!
Reply:I wouldn't say "mannequin queen." That sounds odd or silly. THAT'S JUST MY OPINION.
Reply:its good, see im probrably the only white RnB songwriter and ive done some interesting stuff
keep it up
Reply:it's cool
Reply:If your going for depressing then it works great. Not something I typically listen to though, but I think if you like that sort of thing, it has potential.
**Dont worry about how long it takes to write, master pieces dont usually happen over night. The fact that your taking so long just says your putting your all into it, your dedicated to making it good, and your thoughtful...all good traits! Good luck!!
Reply:let me help u with something.....
when writing a song lyric its much much much harder...then writing poetry...bc somehow u start 2 sing it!right?
1st start writing it as a poem...just write anything,,I mean anything.....even when it doesnt make sence...just write write..
everytime when u hear a word/sentence..just write it..
then later...u check and u correct them...
and u get to choose if u want it as a poem/or a lyric song!
Reply:I can see Adam Sandler singing something like that.
:)
Keep working on it.
you're doing better than me!
Reply:hey whats up o think it has a lot of potential. so keep going never give up on anything. it takes me sometime a long time to wright a poems to the best poems come out from a long time writing it
Do you like.....?
aly and aj the potential break up??? i thnk that songs klas!! xxx
Do you like.....?
yeah i love that song! its fun to dance to!
Reply:i like it alotttt.
i put it as my boyfriends ringtone and changed his attitude.
Reply:*** f erin!!!
Do you like.....?
yeah i love that song! its fun to dance to!
Reply:i like it alotttt.
i put it as my boyfriends ringtone and changed his attitude.
Reply:*** f erin!!!
Sunday, November 15, 2009
Do you like this song by Aly and Aj?
~Potential break up~
Its a good way to break up with ur bf..lmao
http://youtube.com/watch?v=bqpA5Acc8-c
Do you like this song by Aly and Aj?
Love it__and your right! Hahh.
♥
Reply:yeah, i guess its alright.
Reply:FAVORITE SONG.
i listened to it like 500 times..
well then it got kinda old.
but its a sweet song.
and boys are stupid..
so yay for them making the song.
Reply:loves it
Reply:Really cool song! I'm gonna get it of I tunes real soon.
Reply:ya
Reply:haha i lovee that song .
even though im not totally into that kind of music(:
Reply:its ok
Reply:yeah i think its great! You should have seen them when they were recording it! Its a great song.
Reply:I love it!!!!
Reply:Its cool I love it
Reply:I luv that song!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But i found out this song was not about Aj ex-boyfriend Joe Jonas though! But i do luv this song though!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reply:Its a catchy song, but Im not into that kind of music
Reply:Their song waz ok did u like it
Reply:i love that song!!!!!!!!
Reply:i love it!!!! ...now all i want is just my stuff back...do you get that? let me repeat that... i want my stuff back!!! dun dun dun! love it=]
Reply:omg, i'm listening to that rite now. that song is amazing...definitley my favorite.
Its a good way to break up with ur bf..lmao
http://youtube.com/watch?v=bqpA5Acc8-c
Do you like this song by Aly and Aj?
Love it__and your right! Hahh.
♥
Reply:yeah, i guess its alright.
Reply:FAVORITE SONG.
i listened to it like 500 times..
well then it got kinda old.
but its a sweet song.
and boys are stupid..
so yay for them making the song.
Reply:loves it
Reply:Really cool song! I'm gonna get it of I tunes real soon.
Reply:ya
Reply:haha i lovee that song .
even though im not totally into that kind of music(:
Reply:its ok
Reply:yeah i think its great! You should have seen them when they were recording it! Its a great song.
Reply:I love it!!!!
Reply:Its cool I love it
Reply:I luv that song!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But i found out this song was not about Aj ex-boyfriend Joe Jonas though! But i do luv this song though!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reply:Its a catchy song, but Im not into that kind of music
Reply:Their song waz ok did u like it
Reply:i love that song!!!!!!!!
Reply:i love it!!!! ...now all i want is just my stuff back...do you get that? let me repeat that... i want my stuff back!!! dun dun dun! love it=]
Reply:omg, i'm listening to that rite now. that song is amazing...definitley my favorite.
Aly and aj New songs?
does anyone have a video of any of aly and aj's new songs .
NOt potential break up
Aly and aj New songs?
Sorry, I can't find any music videos for their new songs, but here is the complete track listing for Insomniatic:
1. Potential BreakUp Song
2. Bullseye
3. Closure
4. ÷
5. Like It or Leave It
6. Like Whoa
7. Insomniatic
8. Silence
9. If I Could Have You Back
10. Blush
11. Flattery
12. I'm Here
13. Chemicals React (remix)
I can't wait to hear all of it!!! I hope this helped.
speed ice skates
NOt potential break up
Aly and aj New songs?
Sorry, I can't find any music videos for their new songs, but here is the complete track listing for Insomniatic:
1. Potential BreakUp Song
2. Bullseye
3. Closure
4. ÷
5. Like It or Leave It
6. Like Whoa
7. Insomniatic
8. Silence
9. If I Could Have You Back
10. Blush
11. Flattery
12. I'm Here
13. Chemicals React (remix)
I can't wait to hear all of it!!! I hope this helped.
speed ice skates
Omg i dont want to get sued!!!?
ok well ok i was looking at my vids a couple of minutes ago and i saw "aly and aj potential break up song official music video" under my videos!!!!here is a screenshot
http://i247.photobucket.com/albums/gg129...
i do not own ANY rights to it and im freaked out b/c i dont want to get my account deleted!!!!can u tell me how 2 fix it????PLZ HURRY!!!
Omg i dont want to get sued!!!?
its ok just dnt make a big deal about it
Reply:relax, take a breather will ya?
Reply:Don't worry about it, you're fine. YouTube will just delete the video from your account if someone complains. You will not get sued LOL
http://i247.photobucket.com/albums/gg129...
i do not own ANY rights to it and im freaked out b/c i dont want to get my account deleted!!!!can u tell me how 2 fix it????PLZ HURRY!!!
Omg i dont want to get sued!!!?
its ok just dnt make a big deal about it
Reply:relax, take a breather will ya?
Reply:Don't worry about it, you're fine. YouTube will just delete the video from your account if someone complains. You will not get sued LOL
Which actresses style should i have or give me a makover.Best answer 10 POINTS?
Aly and AJ/Love their clothes and makeup plus Alys hair.
Miley Cyrus/Hannah Montana/Love her clothes too.
Ashley Tisdale/love her hair.
Lindsay Lohan/has great physique.
Ali Lohan/like her hair and mascara.
Camilla Belle.
You can suggest other actresses too if you like that don't wear clothes that reveal their body too much.I am a bit conservative and i don't wear clothes like Britney Spears.
I am tired of looking like a fool.
I really like those actresses sense of style.I am not trying to be a copy cat,i am just taking some inspiration.This summer i need a complete makeover before school starts.
Please give me sites or tips on how i can be beautiful or give me a makeover by yourself.
May you also tell me where i can find clothes of Aly and AJ online or IN SHOPS like the one they wore on potential break up song and like whoa.
Thanks.
Which actresses style should i have or give me a makover.Best answer 10 POINTS?
I like ashleys style the most she seem to wear the most affordable clothes!
Ashley:( i did not make these)
http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=22387...
http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=22001...
http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=21875...
I also like ALY and AJs im not as rocker as them but some of their styles i like!
http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=90721...
http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=35195...
http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=59550...
Hope these help!
Reply:Top = Aly and AJ
Bottom (Pants and All) = Hannah Montana / Miley Cyrus
Ashley's Hair
Reply:lindsay lohan hair
aly and aj clothes
and ali lohans mascara
Miley Cyrus/Hannah Montana/Love her clothes too.
Ashley Tisdale/love her hair.
Lindsay Lohan/has great physique.
Ali Lohan/like her hair and mascara.
Camilla Belle.
You can suggest other actresses too if you like that don't wear clothes that reveal their body too much.I am a bit conservative and i don't wear clothes like Britney Spears.
I am tired of looking like a fool.
I really like those actresses sense of style.I am not trying to be a copy cat,i am just taking some inspiration.This summer i need a complete makeover before school starts.
Please give me sites or tips on how i can be beautiful or give me a makeover by yourself.
May you also tell me where i can find clothes of Aly and AJ online or IN SHOPS like the one they wore on potential break up song and like whoa.
Thanks.
Which actresses style should i have or give me a makover.Best answer 10 POINTS?
I like ashleys style the most she seem to wear the most affordable clothes!
Ashley:( i did not make these)
http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=22387...
http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=22001...
http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=21875...
I also like ALY and AJs im not as rocker as them but some of their styles i like!
http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=90721...
http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=35195...
http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=59550...
Hope these help!
Reply:Top = Aly and AJ
Bottom (Pants and All) = Hannah Montana / Miley Cyrus
Ashley's Hair
Reply:lindsay lohan hair
aly and aj clothes
and ali lohans mascara
Which best represents you?
avril lavigne's - hot
u think you are ontop of the world and u can't get him outta your system
T-Pain's- Cyclone
im hot ur not so? go eat a bag of chips hah guyz think im hot and can't stay off my back
SOULJA BOI-
u are taken but your confused
HEY THERE DELILAH-
single and keeping it pimpin
LETS SEE HOW FAR WE'VE COME-
Just single and you kinda like someone,%26amp; they like you, but you kind of dont care it's w/e
Aly and Aj's -POTENTIAL BREAK UP SONG-
Like someone and you think they like u but your not sure / single
GIRLFRIEND- Having fun
POP LOCK AND DROP IT-Single, and ur just goin with the flow and whatever happens happens
SCAR TISSUE- Single, and u know that nobody will ever like you, and u really dont give a crap!(at least thats how it feels)
KISS KISS- taken and absolutely love that person with everything in you and all that you are... you can't see yourself with anyone else.
BUBBLY- taken, every time you see the persons face he/she makes you smile
LOVE IS PAIN- you thought you found the perfect person, AND wut you thought would last forever- ended so soon........
Which best represents you?
pop lock and drop it.
u think you are ontop of the world and u can't get him outta your system
T-Pain's- Cyclone
im hot ur not so? go eat a bag of chips hah guyz think im hot and can't stay off my back
SOULJA BOI-
u are taken but your confused
HEY THERE DELILAH-
single and keeping it pimpin
LETS SEE HOW FAR WE'VE COME-
Just single and you kinda like someone,%26amp; they like you, but you kind of dont care it's w/e
Aly and Aj's -POTENTIAL BREAK UP SONG-
Like someone and you think they like u but your not sure / single
GIRLFRIEND- Having fun
POP LOCK AND DROP IT-Single, and ur just goin with the flow and whatever happens happens
SCAR TISSUE- Single, and u know that nobody will ever like you, and u really dont give a crap!(at least thats how it feels)
KISS KISS- taken and absolutely love that person with everything in you and all that you are... you can't see yourself with anyone else.
BUBBLY- taken, every time you see the persons face he/she makes you smile
LOVE IS PAIN- you thought you found the perfect person, AND wut you thought would last forever- ended so soon........
Which best represents you?
pop lock and drop it.
Are Miley and the Jonas Brothers fighting?
in a magazine i read an article that miley and the Jonas Brothers might be fighting through YouTube. it said Miley made fun of nick in one video and she jokingly said he was "irresistable". miley and mandy also put a video up of them dancing to "potential break up song" by aly and aj. AND the Jonas Brothers said in a video "Oh how the tables have turned". i noticed that they uploaded that video on Valentine's Day. I think they are fighting through YouTube about the break up between miley and nick. wat do u think?
Are Miley and the Jonas Brothers fighting?
mabye. could you send me the links to those videos?
Reply:miley deserves a better and tougher man then nick.
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Are Miley and the Jonas Brothers fighting?
mabye. could you send me the links to those videos?
Reply:miley deserves a better and tougher man then nick.
roller skates
Aly and AJ!?
Is their new cd Insomniatic coming out on July 10th worth buying? Their single from this cd is Potential Break- Up Song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8UdnCat8s...
I only like Aly and AJ for their music and not the entire Disney Channel actor-actress-singer group.
Aly and AJ!?
Its not even out yet and there arent any leak tracks other than that first single so I guess you have to judge the CD later from clips
Reply:I think it will totally be worth buying. Potential Break-Up Song is awesome. Like what you want to like and tell everyone else to shut up if they say something about it...
Reply:Um... Aly %26amp; AJ are...well... kiddish
Reply:I know what you mean. The fact that they are from Disney Channel kind of makes them uncool. I like their music a lot though but I never tell my friends because they are from Disney Channel and if you like them it makes you seem like a little girl or something. But yeah its worth buying.
I only like Aly and AJ for their music and not the entire Disney Channel actor-actress-singer group.
Aly and AJ!?
Its not even out yet and there arent any leak tracks other than that first single so I guess you have to judge the CD later from clips
Reply:I think it will totally be worth buying. Potential Break-Up Song is awesome. Like what you want to like and tell everyone else to shut up if they say something about it...
Reply:Um... Aly %26amp; AJ are...well... kiddish
Reply:I know what you mean. The fact that they are from Disney Channel kind of makes them uncool. I like their music a lot though but I never tell my friends because they are from Disney Channel and if you like them it makes you seem like a little girl or something. But yeah its worth buying.
Let's see what you think?
Which Playlist is Better?
Playlist 1
"Nobody's Perfect" Hannah Montana
"Say Good-bye" by Skillet
"Potential Break-up Song" by Uknown
"Barracuda" by Heart
Playlist 2
"Master Of Puppets" Metallica
"Raining Blood" by Slayer
"Prince Of Darkness" by Megadeth
"My Curse" by Killswitch Engageded
"Cowboys From Hell" by Pantera
This is a Bet
Let's see what you think?
Playlist 2 = )
Playlist 1 = (
Reply:playlist 2 cuzz i dont like hannah montana o and the potential break-up song is by aly and aj btw
Reply:playlist 2 just b/c i dont like hannah montana or miley =)
Playlist 1
"Nobody's Perfect" Hannah Montana
"Say Good-bye" by Skillet
"Potential Break-up Song" by Uknown
"Barracuda" by Heart
Playlist 2
"Master Of Puppets" Metallica
"Raining Blood" by Slayer
"Prince Of Darkness" by Megadeth
"My Curse" by Killswitch Engageded
"Cowboys From Hell" by Pantera
This is a Bet
Let's see what you think?
Playlist 2 = )
Playlist 1 = (
Reply:playlist 2 cuzz i dont like hannah montana o and the potential break-up song is by aly and aj btw
Reply:playlist 2 just b/c i dont like hannah montana or miley =)
Embarrassed to say?
do you have any singers, bands, or songs that you tell everyone else you hate, but you secretly like??!!!
Come on tell me!!!!
I'm sorry to say that I actually like "potential break up song" and "chemicals react" by Aly and AJ. I also like the spice girls, because I was obsessed with them when I was like 7!!
Embarrassed to say?
hey there delilah by plain white tees
Reply:I secretly like Aly %26amp; AJ. My friends, my family, and everyone else that I know doesn't know that I like them (a lot). I would never say I hate them, but I wouldn't say I like them, because then people will think I'm weird, or maybe even gay for liking "girlish" songs. If someone brings the subject up, I'll just try to avoid it, or change the subject.
Reply:Not much REAL Rock-n-Roll, that I don't care for and also most of what they called country/rock..........Which through the years has been called "Southern Rock" I like most music as long as there is a good beat %26amp; or story to it. Example: The Dance ~ Garth Brooks......the video is killer
Reply:Aly %26amp; AJ
Jonas Brothers
Miley Cyrus
most of the songs on my iPod are pretty mainstream though.
P.S. Aly %26amp; AJ are my favorite singers!
Reply:Im not embarassed that I have songs by miley cyrus on my Zune haha My Mom has that mm bop song by hanson on her ipod, now THATS embarassing
Reply:um no
Reply:no. im very truthful with what i like.
Come on tell me!!!!
I'm sorry to say that I actually like "potential break up song" and "chemicals react" by Aly and AJ. I also like the spice girls, because I was obsessed with them when I was like 7!!
Embarrassed to say?
hey there delilah by plain white tees
Reply:I secretly like Aly %26amp; AJ. My friends, my family, and everyone else that I know doesn't know that I like them (a lot). I would never say I hate them, but I wouldn't say I like them, because then people will think I'm weird, or maybe even gay for liking "girlish" songs. If someone brings the subject up, I'll just try to avoid it, or change the subject.
Reply:Not much REAL Rock-n-Roll, that I don't care for and also most of what they called country/rock..........Which through the years has been called "Southern Rock" I like most music as long as there is a good beat %26amp; or story to it. Example: The Dance ~ Garth Brooks......the video is killer
Reply:Aly %26amp; AJ
Jonas Brothers
Miley Cyrus
most of the songs on my iPod are pretty mainstream though.
P.S. Aly %26amp; AJ are my favorite singers!
Reply:Im not embarassed that I have songs by miley cyrus on my Zune haha My Mom has that mm bop song by hanson on her ipod, now THATS embarassing
Reply:um no
Reply:no. im very truthful with what i like.
Who has heard...?
the new song by Aly %26amp; AJ - Potential Break-Up Song?
I didn't want to hear it at first but it sounds pretty good!
I got it on my iPod.
Lol.
Feedback?
Who has heard...?
yeah i heard it! Its pretty nice :) ive got it 2 lol theyr shotting a video on it! :D
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I didn't want to hear it at first but it sounds pretty good!
I got it on my iPod.
Lol.
Feedback?
Who has heard...?
yeah i heard it! Its pretty nice :) ive got it 2 lol theyr shotting a video on it! :D
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Music Questions?
Does the Potential Break Up Song by Aly and AJ and Before He Cheats by Carrie Underwood really reflect on the celebs breaking up or getting cheated on???
Other Question
Did Busted help The Jonas Brothers rewrite the lyerics to Year 3000????
Thanks for helping me with this!!!
Music Questions?
those songs are usually about personal expieriences.
it was busteds song in the first place the only thing they changed was "it had out sold kelly clarkson" it used to be " it had outsold micheal jackson"
Other Question
Did Busted help The Jonas Brothers rewrite the lyerics to Year 3000????
Thanks for helping me with this!!!
Music Questions?
those songs are usually about personal expieriences.
it was busteds song in the first place the only thing they changed was "it had out sold kelly clarkson" it used to be " it had outsold micheal jackson"
Aly and Aj?
What is the best song by Aly and Aj.... rush, chemicals react or potential break up song?? I can't decide so please help
Aly and Aj?
i like potential breakup song and chemicals react
Reply:I like Chemicals React
Reply:Potential break up song
Reply:Chemicals React. I like Into the Rush but Chemicals react is just a better song and the Potential break up song=not my favorite
Reply:hard to decide
the song called "the rush"
Reply:potential breakup song defenetly and it is new lol
Reply:potential break up song
Reply:potential break up song. fersureeeee.
Reply:chemicals react for me
Reply:potential break up song
i think
Reply:i really like rush.
Reply:chemicals react , it makes them sound cool, and if you just heard this song you would not know they are wit disney channel
Aly and Aj?
i like potential breakup song and chemicals react
Reply:I like Chemicals React
Reply:Potential break up song
Reply:Chemicals React. I like Into the Rush but Chemicals react is just a better song and the Potential break up song=not my favorite
Reply:hard to decide
the song called "the rush"
Reply:potential breakup song defenetly and it is new lol
Reply:potential break up song
Reply:potential break up song. fersureeeee.
Reply:chemicals react for me
Reply:potential break up song
i think
Reply:i really like rush.
Reply:chemicals react , it makes them sound cool, and if you just heard this song you would not know they are wit disney channel
Do aly&aj lip sync?
in this video for potential break up song aly (curly hair) doesnt look liek she lip syncing but aj (long hair ) looks liek she is are the both is one or are none of them lip syncing btw: f this is your first time seeing this video aj (long hair) sings in the middle i think aly sings for about a minute then aj comes in this is the video : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bqpA5Acc8...
Do aly%26amp;aj lip sync?
They both do a lot of stuff in that video that looks like they would be lip syncing, so they probably are just for the video. If you saw them them sing live, they would probably actually be singing live.
Reply:every artist lipsyncing in their videos..but if they dont know how to very good they sing with the song and the ppl editing the video takes out the "real life" singing and just keep the pre recording..this DOESN'T mean they lipsync when they perform live Report Abuse
Reply:Every singer lip syncs in their music videos, but they are 100% really singing at concerts! =] Report Abuse
Reply:its possible i think all singers do it at one time or another some just cover it up better
Reply:no they really sing that's why they are singers.... beacause of there singing talent.
Reply:i really dont care who lipsyncs..... i really dont
Reply:no,
they dont
but it probely was a prerecorded track
dont they do that for movies and stuff
they record a song and "lip""sink" it
its just to add more ooph to her voice
Reply:Well, of course, they're going to lip sync in music videos...ALL artists do. It's common sense.
As for concerts, no., they don't lip sync.
Do aly%26amp;aj lip sync?
They both do a lot of stuff in that video that looks like they would be lip syncing, so they probably are just for the video. If you saw them them sing live, they would probably actually be singing live.
Reply:every artist lipsyncing in their videos..but if they dont know how to very good they sing with the song and the ppl editing the video takes out the "real life" singing and just keep the pre recording..this DOESN'T mean they lipsync when they perform live Report Abuse
Reply:Every singer lip syncs in their music videos, but they are 100% really singing at concerts! =] Report Abuse
Reply:its possible i think all singers do it at one time or another some just cover it up better
Reply:no they really sing that's why they are singers.... beacause of there singing talent.
Reply:i really dont care who lipsyncs..... i really dont
Reply:no,
they dont
but it probely was a prerecorded track
dont they do that for movies and stuff
they record a song and "lip""sink" it
its just to add more ooph to her voice
Reply:Well, of course, they're going to lip sync in music videos...ALL artists do. It's common sense.
As for concerts, no., they don't lip sync.
Ringtone help ?????????????? ♥♥♥♥?
i'm 13 and i need a new ringtone here are some of my favorites so tell me which one
1. Kelly Rowland: Like This
2. Aly%26amp;Aj Potential Break Up Song
3. Cyclone : baby bash ft. t-pain
etc. ♥
Ringtone help ?????????????? ♥♥♥♥?
www.myxertones.com
Its all free!
Reply:All 3 send me some ;P
Reply:phone zoo or zoo phone or something like that
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1. Kelly Rowland: Like This
2. Aly%26amp;Aj Potential Break Up Song
3. Cyclone : baby bash ft. t-pain
etc. ♥
Ringtone help ?????????????? ♥♥♥♥?
www.myxertones.com
Its all free!
Reply:All 3 send me some ;P
Reply:phone zoo or zoo phone or something like that
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FLUT NOTEs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...
can someone give me sheet music for
aly and al potential break up song
zelda theme song (old)
mario theme song (old)
FLUT NOTEs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...
try here:http://rds.yahoo.com/_ylt=A0geu.esYO1Gge...
http://stat.dealtime.com/xClickOutEvent/...
aly and al potential break up song
zelda theme song (old)
mario theme song (old)
FLUT NOTEs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...
try here:http://rds.yahoo.com/_ylt=A0geu.esYO1Gge...
http://stat.dealtime.com/xClickOutEvent/...
Hey plz help?
ok im making a cd and i dont know what other songs i should put on there i need 20 songs i have 9 i like these songs and i already have them as my 9
stronger kayne west
crank that soulja boy
wall to wall chris brown
ay bay bay hurricane chris
i got neve hannah montana
beautiful girls sean kingston
bartender t pain
same girl r kelly
potential break up song aly and aj
Hey plz help?
1. good life-kanye west
2. apologize-timbaland
3. there's nothing-sean kingston and paula deanda
4. dont matter-akon
5. easy-paula deanda
6. buy u a drank
7. hate that i love you-rihanna
8. shut up and drive-rihanna
9. lean like a cholo
10.hypnotize-akon and plies
11. walk it out-unk
12. big girls dont cry-fergie
13. kiss kiss-chris brown
14. sweetest girl-wyclef jean
15. wanna be with u-paula deanda
16. walk away-paula deanda
17. when it was me-paula deanda
18. stranger-hillary duff
19. umbrella-rihanna
Reply:1. A little too late
2. Love like winter
3. Into the ocean
4. Wait a minute
5. Welcome to the black parade
6. I wanna love u
7. Temperature
8. Miracle
9. Pressure
10. Misery business
11. What I’ve done
12. In the end
13. Feel good inc
14. Rush
15. Photo
16. Whine up
17. Clothes off
18. Fix you
19. Easy
20. Give it up to me
21. Over and over
22. Technologic
23. I am better alone
24. Show me the money
25. Get up
26. Bite back
27. Tambourine
some of my fav songs
Reply:kiss kiss from chris brown-really good
g-slide from lil mama-okay
lip gloss-lil mama-good
buy u a drink-t pain-pretty good
an then just go to yahoo music and you can look on the top 100 songs and figure out what else you want
Reply:If this is the type of music you want...
1. AYO technology - 50 Cent feat. Justin Timberlake
2. Back Like That - Ghostface Killah feat NE-YO %26amp; Kanye West
3. Good Life - Kanye West feat T-Pain
4. Baby Don't Go - Fabolous feat T-Pain
stronger kayne west
crank that soulja boy
wall to wall chris brown
ay bay bay hurricane chris
i got neve hannah montana
beautiful girls sean kingston
bartender t pain
same girl r kelly
potential break up song aly and aj
Hey plz help?
1. good life-kanye west
2. apologize-timbaland
3. there's nothing-sean kingston and paula deanda
4. dont matter-akon
5. easy-paula deanda
6. buy u a drank
7. hate that i love you-rihanna
8. shut up and drive-rihanna
9. lean like a cholo
10.hypnotize-akon and plies
11. walk it out-unk
12. big girls dont cry-fergie
13. kiss kiss-chris brown
14. sweetest girl-wyclef jean
15. wanna be with u-paula deanda
16. walk away-paula deanda
17. when it was me-paula deanda
18. stranger-hillary duff
19. umbrella-rihanna
Reply:1. A little too late
2. Love like winter
3. Into the ocean
4. Wait a minute
5. Welcome to the black parade
6. I wanna love u
7. Temperature
8. Miracle
9. Pressure
10. Misery business
11. What I’ve done
12. In the end
13. Feel good inc
14. Rush
15. Photo
16. Whine up
17. Clothes off
18. Fix you
19. Easy
20. Give it up to me
21. Over and over
22. Technologic
23. I am better alone
24. Show me the money
25. Get up
26. Bite back
27. Tambourine
some of my fav songs
Reply:kiss kiss from chris brown-really good
g-slide from lil mama-okay
lip gloss-lil mama-good
buy u a drink-t pain-pretty good
an then just go to yahoo music and you can look on the top 100 songs and figure out what else you want
Reply:If this is the type of music you want...
1. AYO technology - 50 Cent feat. Justin Timberlake
2. Back Like That - Ghostface Killah feat NE-YO %26amp; Kanye West
3. Good Life - Kanye West feat T-Pain
4. Baby Don't Go - Fabolous feat T-Pain
Who likes aly and aj's new cd?
what songs do you like the best
i like potential break up song and silence
Who likes aly and aj's new cd?
Potential break up song is my favorite.
Those girls are so talented.
Don't forget pretty!!
Argh.
Reply:I only bout "Silence" on iTunes...but I'm going somewhere this weekend to actually buy the CD...considering I have no money left on iTunes, lol.
But I LOVE "Silence", "Potential Breakup Song", and "Like Whoa"
Reply:i dont have the cd but i like the potentiol break up song!
Reply:my 99 year deaf senile grandmother loves it she jams to it every night
Reply:Yeah, I like the album too.
Too many good songs.
Top favorites:
Potential Breakup Song
Bullseye
Like Whoa
Insomniatic
Like it or leave it
If I Could Have You Back
Reply:ive only heard the potential breakup song and i really liked it
Reply:yeah that is a great song i like their album
Reply:i hvnt heaerd the thr cd but i am in LOVE with thr new hot single PBUS!!!
Reply:I love their new CD!!!! My favorite songs are all of them. But the song I like the most is The Potential Break Up Song.
Reply:i dont like em
i like potential break up song and silence
Who likes aly and aj's new cd?
Potential break up song is my favorite.
Those girls are so talented.
Don't forget pretty!!
Argh.
Reply:I only bout "Silence" on iTunes...but I'm going somewhere this weekend to actually buy the CD...considering I have no money left on iTunes, lol.
But I LOVE "Silence", "Potential Breakup Song", and "Like Whoa"
Reply:i dont have the cd but i like the potentiol break up song!
Reply:my 99 year deaf senile grandmother loves it she jams to it every night
Reply:Yeah, I like the album too.
Too many good songs.
Top favorites:
Potential Breakup Song
Bullseye
Like Whoa
Insomniatic
Like it or leave it
If I Could Have You Back
Reply:ive only heard the potential breakup song and i really liked it
Reply:yeah that is a great song i like their album
Reply:i hvnt heaerd the thr cd but i am in LOVE with thr new hot single PBUS!!!
Reply:I love their new CD!!!! My favorite songs are all of them. But the song I like the most is The Potential Break Up Song.
Reply:i dont like em
AJ and Joe jonas????????
how long ago did AJ michalka and Joe jonas date? for how long? is it true that aj wrote 'potential break up song' for joe, and then joe wrote 'move on' for her (the recording company prevented them from putting 'move on' on their CD because of the parent complaints and harshness of the song)?
AJ and Joe jonas????????
They dated in like 2006 when they were on tour with each other as the Jonas Brothers as the opening act.
No. Joe said that move on was written for other experiences that were not about AJ, because the 2 of them are still friends. They only broke up because of distance.
Sadly, JB didn't put move on on their cd but said you might see it on their new cd coming summer 2008.
Hope I helped..... :)
Reply:They dated in 2006, for 6months, and they broke up in August some time. AJ broke it off.
Move On or Potential Break Up Song hasn't been officially confirmed that it's about their ex's, so only they know for sure. But it is true that Move On was too harsh, so they had to cut it back - - Inseparable replaced it.
Reply:a whle
Reply:I heard that the potential break up song was written by someone else (not AJ)...idk about "move on" but they broke up a long time ago, i think a couple of years, so i doubt that Joe wrote that song about her either.
Reply:YEAH IT'S TRUE!
sucks doesn't it? I honestly couldn't believe my ears when I heard the song MOVE ON
i was like OMG!! wtf? that was such a harsh song! you would never expect someone so sweet to write something so mean.
%26amp;%26amp; like at least AJ's was subtle. Joe didn't hold back how he felt. he really hit her hard.
but yeah they couldn't put it on the CD because it was way to mean.
Reply:i know they went out with eachother but im not sure on the songs.
Reply:i dont know.
to tell you the truth i wasn't interested in them around the time they went out.
Reply:I didn't know they were going out.
Its probably just a rumor.
She's too young for him. Isn't she only like 16?
Reply:yea they did date! for awhile! i think they were such a cute couple and i like the song move on, even though it is pretty harsh!
Golf Shoes
AJ and Joe jonas????????
They dated in like 2006 when they were on tour with each other as the Jonas Brothers as the opening act.
No. Joe said that move on was written for other experiences that were not about AJ, because the 2 of them are still friends. They only broke up because of distance.
Sadly, JB didn't put move on on their cd but said you might see it on their new cd coming summer 2008.
Hope I helped..... :)
Reply:They dated in 2006, for 6months, and they broke up in August some time. AJ broke it off.
Move On or Potential Break Up Song hasn't been officially confirmed that it's about their ex's, so only they know for sure. But it is true that Move On was too harsh, so they had to cut it back - - Inseparable replaced it.
Reply:a whle
Reply:I heard that the potential break up song was written by someone else (not AJ)...idk about "move on" but they broke up a long time ago, i think a couple of years, so i doubt that Joe wrote that song about her either.
Reply:YEAH IT'S TRUE!
sucks doesn't it? I honestly couldn't believe my ears when I heard the song MOVE ON
i was like OMG!! wtf? that was such a harsh song! you would never expect someone so sweet to write something so mean.
%26amp;%26amp; like at least AJ's was subtle. Joe didn't hold back how he felt. he really hit her hard.
but yeah they couldn't put it on the CD because it was way to mean.
Reply:i know they went out with eachother but im not sure on the songs.
Reply:i dont know.
to tell you the truth i wasn't interested in them around the time they went out.
Reply:I didn't know they were going out.
Its probably just a rumor.
She's too young for him. Isn't she only like 16?
Reply:yea they did date! for awhile! i think they were such a cute couple and i like the song move on, even though it is pretty harsh!
Golf Shoes
One fast question!?
please answer my question about the guy help! pleaseeeeeeeeeee! also who like the song bye aly and aj the potential break up song?
One fast question!?
Sorry, but I don’t really want to answer your question about the “guy help”. Once again I’m sorry. By the way, I don’t like that song…I love it! It’s awesome! The lyrics and the melody are great, I like almost all of the songs by Aly and AJ! They rock!
Reply:I LOVE THAT SONG!!!!
its soo good.
One fast question!?
Sorry, but I don’t really want to answer your question about the “guy help”. Once again I’m sorry. By the way, I don’t like that song…I love it! It’s awesome! The lyrics and the melody are great, I like almost all of the songs by Aly and AJ! They rock!
Reply:I LOVE THAT SONG!!!!
its soo good.
Aj michalka and joe jonas question!?
so i was wondering if aly and aj's potential break up song was written about aj and joe jonas? and if anybody knows who nick jonas wrote SOS about, that would be great! thanks guyss
Aj michalka and joe jonas question!?
I don't know if "Potential Breakup Song" was about AJ and Joe. Nick wrote S.O.S. about a girl he dated before he became famous.
Reply:???????????
doubt it 4 both
Reply:Nick wrote it about some girl he dated when
they weren't famous yet , I think .
Reply:i don't know about potential break up song, but nick wrote s.o.s. about a girl he really liked but she didn't think of him like that and he always got mixed messages, "well I'm done with texting, sorry for the miscommunication."
Reply:I doubt it about Potential Break-up song. I heard S.O.S was written for Miley Cyrus though, which I think is true, because a while back in a magzine, Miley said her and Nick sometimes go out on group dates.
Aj michalka and joe jonas question!?
I don't know if "Potential Breakup Song" was about AJ and Joe. Nick wrote S.O.S. about a girl he dated before he became famous.
Reply:???????????
doubt it 4 both
Reply:Nick wrote it about some girl he dated when
they weren't famous yet , I think .
Reply:i don't know about potential break up song, but nick wrote s.o.s. about a girl he really liked but she didn't think of him like that and he always got mixed messages, "well I'm done with texting, sorry for the miscommunication."
Reply:I doubt it about Potential Break-up song. I heard S.O.S was written for Miley Cyrus though, which I think is true, because a while back in a magzine, Miley said her and Nick sometimes go out on group dates.
Aly and aj?
is aly and aj's potential break up song dedicated to anyone on how they feel?
Aly and aj?
i don't really think so, sorry. if i knew i would tell you.
Reply:no,i think its one of their worst.
Reply:i love it i saw that new cd out!!!!!!
Reply:probably, they are the ones who know.
maybe is when Aj and Joe from the Jonas Brothers broke up. just guessing.
wait what song?
Aly and aj?
i don't really think so, sorry. if i knew i would tell you.
Reply:no,i think its one of their worst.
Reply:i love it i saw that new cd out!!!!!!
Reply:probably, they are the ones who know.
maybe is when Aj and Joe from the Jonas Brothers broke up. just guessing.
wait what song?
What album is....?
potential break up song by aly and aj? is it a new song or something? its not on itunes or anything.
What album is....?
Yes. It Is A New Song But You Can Find The Video on YouTube %26amp; You Can Download The Song On Limewire.
shoes stock
What album is....?
Yes. It Is A New Song But You Can Find The Video on YouTube %26amp; You Can Download The Song On Limewire.
shoes stock
Who likes Aly and AJ?
their new song is LIKE WHOA btw
I like potential break up song too...
Who likes Aly and AJ?
I LOVE the rollercoaster one.. Potenial Break up is really good too.
Reply:Theyre allright some songs just dont make sence
Reply:Is it sad to admit that yes I do?! I have taken to downloading as much of their stuff as I can find... maybe I need help for my cheese addiction?! LOL!!
Reply:OMG i love ally and aj they rock!!! potential break-up song is the best!!!
Reply:i luv dem!
i like break up song and sticks and stones the most!
there great!
Reply:I like them. They're good singers, and they seem like good people too. I love all their songs, but the break up one is my favorite.
I like potential break up song too...
Who likes Aly and AJ?
I LOVE the rollercoaster one.. Potenial Break up is really good too.
Reply:Theyre allright some songs just dont make sence
Reply:Is it sad to admit that yes I do?! I have taken to downloading as much of their stuff as I can find... maybe I need help for my cheese addiction?! LOL!!
Reply:OMG i love ally and aj they rock!!! potential break-up song is the best!!!
Reply:i luv dem!
i like break up song and sticks and stones the most!
there great!
Reply:I like them. They're good singers, and they seem like good people too. I love all their songs, but the break up one is my favorite.
Hair in aly and aj video?
anyone know how to get hair like alys in their video potential break up song?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bqpA5Acc8...
Hair in aly and aj video?
you can either curl it, moose it, or both
Reply:you can do all of the hairstyles featured in the video with a striaght iron
Reply:one of them has strait hair so u straiten it and the other has long curls so u curl it.i don't know which 1 is aly
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bqpA5Acc8...
Hair in aly and aj video?
you can either curl it, moose it, or both
Reply:you can do all of the hairstyles featured in the video with a striaght iron
Reply:one of them has strait hair so u straiten it and the other has long curls so u curl it.i don't know which 1 is aly
Hair in music video ?
http://youtube.com/watch?v=bqpA5Acc8-c
Do you know how aly did her hair in the music video "potential break-up song" when she has it up? ( when she's wearing white) if so, could you please explain how.
thanks a bunch [;
- sorry if the link doesn't work. just search "potential break-up song on youtube.
Hair in music video ?
she just had her hair wavy/curly and put it up in a mid ponytail with a few pieces down on the sides, very cute!
Reply:i would try playing around with volumizing mouse and a hair waver. then loosly pin the ends up in back letting sum waves hang in the front
Reply:try hair spray and mousse if not then put hair rollers in your hair and some hairy spray good luck
Reply:that hair is so CUTE!! but im sorry i dont know how to do it
Do you know how aly did her hair in the music video "potential break-up song" when she has it up? ( when she's wearing white) if so, could you please explain how.
thanks a bunch [;
- sorry if the link doesn't work. just search "potential break-up song on youtube.
Hair in music video ?
she just had her hair wavy/curly and put it up in a mid ponytail with a few pieces down on the sides, very cute!
Reply:i would try playing around with volumizing mouse and a hair waver. then loosly pin the ends up in back letting sum waves hang in the front
Reply:try hair spray and mousse if not then put hair rollers in your hair and some hairy spray good luck
Reply:that hair is so CUTE!! but im sorry i dont know how to do it
Is Move On by the Jonas Brothers about AJ from Aly & Aj?
Because some people say that that song is about Aj and Potential Break Up Song is about Joe? http://youtube.com/watch?v=4o8IsSVgwUw thats the song. It's also a mean song too!
Is Move On by the Jonas Brothers about AJ from Aly %26amp; Aj?
In interviews, both the JBs %26amp; Aly %26amp; AJ say that the two songa are based on a series of relationships.
Reply:no, it isn't, they were going out but had to go there seperate ways cuz they were touring totally off from eachother
Reply:Maybe.It's possible.I never thought about that before though.Good point.
Reply:NO WAY
they weren't even going out
OMG NICK JONAS IS MINE
%26lt;33
Reply:could be!
Reply:im not really sure, i dont believe they ever came out and publicly said it, so unfortunately i dont believe anyone truly knows. but i do think they were going out, or were just "really good friends"
%26lt;3
tvs
Is Move On by the Jonas Brothers about AJ from Aly %26amp; Aj?
In interviews, both the JBs %26amp; Aly %26amp; AJ say that the two songa are based on a series of relationships.
Reply:no, it isn't, they were going out but had to go there seperate ways cuz they were touring totally off from eachother
Reply:Maybe.It's possible.I never thought about that before though.Good point.
Reply:NO WAY
they weren't even going out
OMG NICK JONAS IS MINE
%26lt;33
Reply:could be!
Reply:im not really sure, i dont believe they ever came out and publicly said it, so unfortunately i dont believe anyone truly knows. but i do think they were going out, or were just "really good friends"
%26lt;3
tvs
Some good music?
its for a party so i need some good suggestions,
heres what i have so far to show you the kind of stuff im looking for
stronger-kanye west
give it to me-timberland ft. nelly furtado and JT
a little less 16 candles a little more touch me- fall out boy
wake up call-maroon 5
my humps-bep
never again-kelly clarkson
the potential break up song- aly%26amp;aj
sexyback-JT
shut up and drive-rihanna
toxic-britteny spears
paralizer-finger 11
hey there Delilah-plain white tees
the way I are-timberland ft. d.o.e%26amp;keri hilson
teenagers-mcr
love stoned-JT
I got it from my mama-wil.i.am
Some good music?
to be loved - papa roach
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NtIswgQ5S...
miracle - cascada
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UCzz4_FPb...
send my love to the dancefloor - cobra starship
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=84saYemcJ...
boom boom boom - vengaboys
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7QBKaMQPO...
=]
Reply:You should use the songs bubbly-Colbie Caillat and Kiss Kiss-Chris Brown
love those songs!!!
Reply:crank that- Soulja Boy
Tokyo Drift- Teriyaki Boys
heres what i have so far to show you the kind of stuff im looking for
stronger-kanye west
give it to me-timberland ft. nelly furtado and JT
a little less 16 candles a little more touch me- fall out boy
wake up call-maroon 5
my humps-bep
never again-kelly clarkson
the potential break up song- aly%26amp;aj
sexyback-JT
shut up and drive-rihanna
toxic-britteny spears
paralizer-finger 11
hey there Delilah-plain white tees
the way I are-timberland ft. d.o.e%26amp;keri hilson
teenagers-mcr
love stoned-JT
I got it from my mama-wil.i.am
Some good music?
to be loved - papa roach
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NtIswgQ5S...
miracle - cascada
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UCzz4_FPb...
send my love to the dancefloor - cobra starship
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=84saYemcJ...
boom boom boom - vengaboys
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7QBKaMQPO...
=]
Reply:You should use the songs bubbly-Colbie Caillat and Kiss Kiss-Chris Brown
love those songs!!!
Reply:crank that- Soulja Boy
Tokyo Drift- Teriyaki Boys
Jojo or aly and aj?
my favorite is jojo!! all the way! but aly and aj's song "the potential break up song" is really cool too, but jojo has real talent!!! rate both of them on a scale of 1 to 10! (my little sister is an aly and aj freak and i am for jojo!)
Jojo or aly and aj?
JoJo's voice is WAY better.
JoJo - 10
Aly and AJ - 7
Reply:omg, me too! i love jojo.
i'd give jojo a 10 and aly and aj a 8
Reply:i like them both but jojo can hit a lot of notes that aly and aj will never be able to. but aly and aj write all of there songs except walking on sunshine and do you believe in magic.
jojo-10
aly and aj-8
Reply:?
Reply:10 for aly and aj they have tons of talent they actually write a lot of their songs.
Reply:I'm a big JoJo fan so i'd have to give JoJo at least a 9, But i'd probably give Aly and Aj like a 7.5 (about).
Reply:none
Reply:I like them both but I really love a song from each (aly %26amp; aj: I'm walking on sunshine) (jojo: a little too late)
Reply:i actually know aly and aj and they are very talented but can't hold a string to jojo
Reply:aly and aj cause jojo is funny lookin and there pretty
Reply:wat Roxygurl said
Reply:i like jojo
Jojo or aly and aj?
JoJo's voice is WAY better.
JoJo - 10
Aly and AJ - 7
Reply:omg, me too! i love jojo.
i'd give jojo a 10 and aly and aj a 8
Reply:i like them both but jojo can hit a lot of notes that aly and aj will never be able to. but aly and aj write all of there songs except walking on sunshine and do you believe in magic.
jojo-10
aly and aj-8
Reply:?
Reply:10 for aly and aj they have tons of talent they actually write a lot of their songs.
Reply:I'm a big JoJo fan so i'd have to give JoJo at least a 9, But i'd probably give Aly and Aj like a 7.5 (about).
Reply:none
Reply:I like them both but I really love a song from each (aly %26amp; aj: I'm walking on sunshine) (jojo: a little too late)
Reply:i actually know aly and aj and they are very talented but can't hold a string to jojo
Reply:aly and aj cause jojo is funny lookin and there pretty
Reply:wat Roxygurl said
Reply:i like jojo
Could anyone get me the downloads for these songs?
there are alot.here they are
Caramell - Caramelldansen (Speedy Cake Remix) 2:57 Caramell Syuper
Viva la Vida 4:04 Coldplay Viva la Vida or Death and All His Friends Alternative
Shut Up And Let Me Go 2:52 The Ting Tings We Started Nothing Indie Pop/Rock
Oh Oh Oh Sexy Vampire 3:07 Fright Ranger Oh Oh Oh Sexy Vampire Single Electronica
It's Not My Time 4:02 3 Doors Down 3 Doors Down Rock
You_Know_What_They_Do_To_Guys_Like_Us_... Chemical Romance Three Cheers for Sweet Revenge Punk
When I Come Around 2:58 Green Day Dookie Alternative %26amp; Punk
Hump De Bump 3:33 Red Hot Chili Peppers Stadium Arcadium Other
Make Damn Sure 3:31 Taking Back Sunday Louder Now Other
038_Offspring-Pretty_Fly[1] 3:09
04_Handle_bars[1] 3:27
Shake It 3:00 Metro Station Metro Station Rock
I Kissed A Girl 3:17 katY PERRY One Of The Boys Other
Beat It (Ft. John Mayer) 3:53 Fall Out Boy Pop Rock
Ichirin no Hana 3:42 HIGH and MIGHTY COLOR Ichirin no Hana
Somebody Told Me 3:17 Killers Hot Fuss
In the End 3:36 Linkin Park Hybrid Theory
Asterisk 2:03 ORANGE RANGE BLEACH Original Soundtrack I Anime
Skyway Avenue 3:26 We the Kings We the Kings Alternative
Guilty Pleasure 3:23 Cobra Starship Viva La Cobra!
It's The End Of The World As We Know It 6:26 R.E.M. Black Session, Paris (07.05.01) Rock
Everyday Super Hero 3:26 Steve Harwell The Pacifier Soundtrack Soundtrack
Welcome to My Life 3:23 Simple Plan Punk Rock
Third_Eye_Blind_-_Semi_Charmed_Life[1]...
Check Yes Juliet 3:42 We the Kings Check Yes Juliet - Single of the Week Alternative
The Waffle Song 0:34 Various Artists Dude, That's Funny! Comedy 1 6/29/2008 8:09 PM
Drist_-_Arterial_Black[1] 3:46 Drist G... Hero 2
Aly %26amp; AJ - Potential Break Up Song 3:25 Aly %26amp; AJ Insomniatic R %26amp; B Rap
Lips Like Morphine 3:39 Kill Hannah
Happy Together 2:35 Simple Plan Freaky Friday Soundtrack Punk Rock
The Hand That Feeds 3:31 Nine Inch Nails With Teeth Metal
This Is Halloween 3:27 Marilyn Manson Nightmare Before Christmas 3D Edition Soundtrack Rock
Could anyone get me the downloads for these songs?
Download Limewire and get them yourself.
EDIT: In that case, there are loads of sites out there that you can get songs from. Search Megaupload, or Rapidshare. Failing that, buy them.
Caramell - Caramelldansen (Speedy Cake Remix) 2:57 Caramell Syuper
Viva la Vida 4:04 Coldplay Viva la Vida or Death and All His Friends Alternative
Shut Up And Let Me Go 2:52 The Ting Tings We Started Nothing Indie Pop/Rock
Oh Oh Oh Sexy Vampire 3:07 Fright Ranger Oh Oh Oh Sexy Vampire Single Electronica
It's Not My Time 4:02 3 Doors Down 3 Doors Down Rock
You_Know_What_They_Do_To_Guys_Like_Us_... Chemical Romance Three Cheers for Sweet Revenge Punk
When I Come Around 2:58 Green Day Dookie Alternative %26amp; Punk
Hump De Bump 3:33 Red Hot Chili Peppers Stadium Arcadium Other
Make Damn Sure 3:31 Taking Back Sunday Louder Now Other
038_Offspring-Pretty_Fly[1] 3:09
04_Handle_bars[1] 3:27
Shake It 3:00 Metro Station Metro Station Rock
I Kissed A Girl 3:17 katY PERRY One Of The Boys Other
Beat It (Ft. John Mayer) 3:53 Fall Out Boy Pop Rock
Ichirin no Hana 3:42 HIGH and MIGHTY COLOR Ichirin no Hana
Somebody Told Me 3:17 Killers Hot Fuss
In the End 3:36 Linkin Park Hybrid Theory
Asterisk 2:03 ORANGE RANGE BLEACH Original Soundtrack I Anime
Skyway Avenue 3:26 We the Kings We the Kings Alternative
Guilty Pleasure 3:23 Cobra Starship Viva La Cobra!
It's The End Of The World As We Know It 6:26 R.E.M. Black Session, Paris (07.05.01) Rock
Everyday Super Hero 3:26 Steve Harwell The Pacifier Soundtrack Soundtrack
Welcome to My Life 3:23 Simple Plan Punk Rock
Third_Eye_Blind_-_Semi_Charmed_Life[1]...
Check Yes Juliet 3:42 We the Kings Check Yes Juliet - Single of the Week Alternative
The Waffle Song 0:34 Various Artists Dude, That's Funny! Comedy 1 6/29/2008 8:09 PM
Drist_-_Arterial_Black[1] 3:46 Drist G... Hero 2
Aly %26amp; AJ - Potential Break Up Song 3:25 Aly %26amp; AJ Insomniatic R %26amp; B Rap
Lips Like Morphine 3:39 Kill Hannah
Happy Together 2:35 Simple Plan Freaky Friday Soundtrack Punk Rock
The Hand That Feeds 3:31 Nine Inch Nails With Teeth Metal
This Is Halloween 3:27 Marilyn Manson Nightmare Before Christmas 3D Edition Soundtrack Rock
Could anyone get me the downloads for these songs?
Download Limewire and get them yourself.
EDIT: In that case, there are loads of sites out there that you can get songs from. Search Megaupload, or Rapidshare. Failing that, buy them.
What was your weirdest dream?
Mine happened when I saw Ally and AJ on TV one day singing "Potential Break-up Song" and I had a dream that night that they were singing it live while I was in a Baskin Robbins. I was trying to pick out a flavor of ice cream at the front counter while running away from this guy who was trying to kill me. They also kept forgetting the words to their song.
What was your weirdest dream?
I was going to school on a boat and when I came home to visit my boyfriend I was looking in our closet and the room was reversed. anyway there was a suppose to be hidden door, it was patched up and I could tell, so I took a hammer and went my way in! I found a desk- which oddly enough was really nice and like 1 I was wanting to get. there was a bed at the far end and lots of geeky things, like plane models, science models, etc. anyway then I noticed a bathroom which since the room was reversed was also the bathroom attached to my bedroom. I go in and it's really clean like mine but it wasn't mine, anyway I pulled back the curtain to see what type of soap and shampoo the person used and there was 2 dead teenage boys bodies. Then on the toilet was a clear garbage bag. in it was a big black cat and my little black kitten. My kitten was alive but the other wasn't and both had a little blue ribbon in their hair. The police came and apparently the one boy had LSD in him and that's likely what killed him and then I was woken up.
We're new to this apartment so I was pretty freaked out, plus weird things happen. One day I was studying and the light in the closet kept flickering and it wasn't even turned on and I've put things in 1 spot and in the morning they're moved. it's creepy. I know the "bedroom" in my dream isn't real because behind my closet is a bathroom and then a bedroom at the far end. but it was messed up....
ps: I'm the same as skrzych, there's 1 dream I have all the time. I'm at the alter getting married and the guy keeps changing, sometimes it's men I know, others I don't know....
Reply:I was a child, and my parents were having a party and we realized the house was full of wolves. So my dad said, "Well, we're gonna have to burn it down." and after we lit it we were all standing out side watching it burn and realized that there were faceless people upstairs trapped in the fire so I crawled in a vehicle and laid on the floor with my hands over my ears so I couldn't hear them scream.
Not only strange, but that dream started when I was about 10, and I'm 32. I have it at least once a year and it's always the exact same. Every detail.
Reply:actually it was last night.
i was sitting outside and suddenly a cute fellow dressed in all black with a long leather black trenchcoat with deep green eyes and black hair with a hawk on his arm come up to me.
he asked if i wanted to go with him.so i followed him to the gloomy woods. and he told be i had the power of lightining and i could save the world. than all of a sudden i tried it and i did it.lightning was shooting thru my hands.
it was a pretty good dream to me.
Reply:that i was in a "candy land" and every time i would step on the jello sidewalk the colors would change...
the weird thing was i couldn't eat anything...
i would try and try but nothing would happen...
ahhh it was driving me crazy!!!
%26lt;3.
Reply:last night I had this dream a big truck drove up with huge doughnuts..(I hate doughnuts)...then this guy gets out of the truck %26amp; has chocolate all over his face...then by b/f starts licking this guys face to get the chocolate off...now that was a weird dream!!! i told me b/f...he said GROSS!!!
Reply:i was married to lindsay lohan it was a nightmare trust me.
Reply:haha! i was in this old yellow bus and i was sitting at the back. so the window was open and there's some cute guy on his bike and i put my head out and spat onto him =P
Reply:you don't want to know my friend
Reply:I was married to my best friend.....
ugh!
Reply:i was attacked... in a parking garage by butterflies. scary and wierd, i know!
Reply:Oh my! That was one weird dream! Once I had a dream that I was on a boat in a scary lagoon and all the cast of The Fresh Prince of Bel-air was there! My friend Renee was there, too! Renee took my socks and put them in the microwave that was on the ship! I know! WEIRD! And then she disappeared! Soon, everyone was gone but me and Will! We started going towards this freaky tree with a light behind it and the Will disappeared! I was screaming and then I woke up! thank goodness!
lol!
~maddie
Reply:The skies turned a very dark grey, no clouds in the sky, and a hand appeared and reach down and picked me up right off the face of the earth. Nobody else was around. I saw no trees, grass, plants, animals.......NOTHING!!! And the hand and arm which was not attached to anything was not what I consider the "Hand Of God"........it was just a dream. Exactly what you asked about.
Reply:That is good, but I had this very strange dream about Santa peering through my windows...very very strange. It could have been the beverages I had to drink before bed. Lol
Reply:I was in the band classroom at school {i'm in band and i hang out there all the time} and a very good friend of mine was telling the funniest jokes he's ever told. a bunch of people were in a circle around him laughing, and i was in the circle laughing along. it was such a humorous dream! until i woke up screaming.
Reply:WHen I was little, I had a dream I was in a flying classic car with Heathcliff (based on the cartoon) and some other cats and we were going really fast trying to get away from the "bad guys". For some reason Heathcliff was looking somewhere else and a high pitched voice saying "watch out!!!" came from the intercomm on the dashboard. We looked ahead and saw we were about to crash into a building. That's were it ended.
Oh yeah, and everything looked like the cartoon. I had "cartoon dreams" a lot when I was little. I miss that!
Reply:I saw some chocolate and my friend said no don't eat but i ate it and later i was Micheal Jackson on trail...VERY SCARY...now I'm afraid of chocolate
Reply:Locked the foors and went to bed in my PJs, had a dream about running around naked. When I woke, I'm also naked. Checked the door if it's locked and it still is. Then I woke up again... for real. ^_^
Reply:That I was getting raped by Freddy Kruger
Reply:i have this one like every two years....
k so me and my family are at like at rock museum and theres this little photo both thing sso me and my mom get in and like 10 other people too. so were really crowded and this voice just goes MWAHAHA YOUR STUCK IN HERE FOR ETERNITY and i was like five in real life so it freaked me out.
Reply:This is a dream I had over a week ago: http://au.answers.yahoo.com/question/ind...
I think dreams are made up of all the things we see and are influenced by all mixed up into the one. I even had a crazy dream this morning but you have to wright them down otherwise you forget.
Reply:That I was hugging Taye Diggs and wouldn't let him go.
*I just watched Malibu's Most Wanted
safety boots
What was your weirdest dream?
I was going to school on a boat and when I came home to visit my boyfriend I was looking in our closet and the room was reversed. anyway there was a suppose to be hidden door, it was patched up and I could tell, so I took a hammer and went my way in! I found a desk- which oddly enough was really nice and like 1 I was wanting to get. there was a bed at the far end and lots of geeky things, like plane models, science models, etc. anyway then I noticed a bathroom which since the room was reversed was also the bathroom attached to my bedroom. I go in and it's really clean like mine but it wasn't mine, anyway I pulled back the curtain to see what type of soap and shampoo the person used and there was 2 dead teenage boys bodies. Then on the toilet was a clear garbage bag. in it was a big black cat and my little black kitten. My kitten was alive but the other wasn't and both had a little blue ribbon in their hair. The police came and apparently the one boy had LSD in him and that's likely what killed him and then I was woken up.
We're new to this apartment so I was pretty freaked out, plus weird things happen. One day I was studying and the light in the closet kept flickering and it wasn't even turned on and I've put things in 1 spot and in the morning they're moved. it's creepy. I know the "bedroom" in my dream isn't real because behind my closet is a bathroom and then a bedroom at the far end. but it was messed up....
ps: I'm the same as skrzych, there's 1 dream I have all the time. I'm at the alter getting married and the guy keeps changing, sometimes it's men I know, others I don't know....
Reply:I was a child, and my parents were having a party and we realized the house was full of wolves. So my dad said, "Well, we're gonna have to burn it down." and after we lit it we were all standing out side watching it burn and realized that there were faceless people upstairs trapped in the fire so I crawled in a vehicle and laid on the floor with my hands over my ears so I couldn't hear them scream.
Not only strange, but that dream started when I was about 10, and I'm 32. I have it at least once a year and it's always the exact same. Every detail.
Reply:actually it was last night.
i was sitting outside and suddenly a cute fellow dressed in all black with a long leather black trenchcoat with deep green eyes and black hair with a hawk on his arm come up to me.
he asked if i wanted to go with him.so i followed him to the gloomy woods. and he told be i had the power of lightining and i could save the world. than all of a sudden i tried it and i did it.lightning was shooting thru my hands.
it was a pretty good dream to me.
Reply:that i was in a "candy land" and every time i would step on the jello sidewalk the colors would change...
the weird thing was i couldn't eat anything...
i would try and try but nothing would happen...
ahhh it was driving me crazy!!!
%26lt;3.
Reply:last night I had this dream a big truck drove up with huge doughnuts..(I hate doughnuts)...then this guy gets out of the truck %26amp; has chocolate all over his face...then by b/f starts licking this guys face to get the chocolate off...now that was a weird dream!!! i told me b/f...he said GROSS!!!
Reply:i was married to lindsay lohan it was a nightmare trust me.
Reply:haha! i was in this old yellow bus and i was sitting at the back. so the window was open and there's some cute guy on his bike and i put my head out and spat onto him =P
Reply:you don't want to know my friend
Reply:I was married to my best friend.....
ugh!
Reply:i was attacked... in a parking garage by butterflies. scary and wierd, i know!
Reply:Oh my! That was one weird dream! Once I had a dream that I was on a boat in a scary lagoon and all the cast of The Fresh Prince of Bel-air was there! My friend Renee was there, too! Renee took my socks and put them in the microwave that was on the ship! I know! WEIRD! And then she disappeared! Soon, everyone was gone but me and Will! We started going towards this freaky tree with a light behind it and the Will disappeared! I was screaming and then I woke up! thank goodness!
lol!
~maddie
Reply:The skies turned a very dark grey, no clouds in the sky, and a hand appeared and reach down and picked me up right off the face of the earth. Nobody else was around. I saw no trees, grass, plants, animals.......NOTHING!!! And the hand and arm which was not attached to anything was not what I consider the "Hand Of God"........it was just a dream. Exactly what you asked about.
Reply:That is good, but I had this very strange dream about Santa peering through my windows...very very strange. It could have been the beverages I had to drink before bed. Lol
Reply:I was in the band classroom at school {i'm in band and i hang out there all the time} and a very good friend of mine was telling the funniest jokes he's ever told. a bunch of people were in a circle around him laughing, and i was in the circle laughing along. it was such a humorous dream! until i woke up screaming.
Reply:WHen I was little, I had a dream I was in a flying classic car with Heathcliff (based on the cartoon) and some other cats and we were going really fast trying to get away from the "bad guys". For some reason Heathcliff was looking somewhere else and a high pitched voice saying "watch out!!!" came from the intercomm on the dashboard. We looked ahead and saw we were about to crash into a building. That's were it ended.
Oh yeah, and everything looked like the cartoon. I had "cartoon dreams" a lot when I was little. I miss that!
Reply:I saw some chocolate and my friend said no don't eat but i ate it and later i was Micheal Jackson on trail...VERY SCARY...now I'm afraid of chocolate
Reply:Locked the foors and went to bed in my PJs, had a dream about running around naked. When I woke, I'm also naked. Checked the door if it's locked and it still is. Then I woke up again... for real. ^_^
Reply:That I was getting raped by Freddy Kruger
Reply:i have this one like every two years....
k so me and my family are at like at rock museum and theres this little photo both thing sso me and my mom get in and like 10 other people too. so were really crowded and this voice just goes MWAHAHA YOUR STUCK IN HERE FOR ETERNITY and i was like five in real life so it freaked me out.
Reply:This is a dream I had over a week ago: http://au.answers.yahoo.com/question/ind...
I think dreams are made up of all the things we see and are influenced by all mixed up into the one. I even had a crazy dream this morning but you have to wright them down otherwise you forget.
Reply:That I was hugging Taye Diggs and wouldn't let him go.
*I just watched Malibu's Most Wanted
safety boots
Song help?
I need to add about 30 more songs to my ipod for the plane ride tomorrow. What are some good songs?
I listen to things like...lipgloss, potential break up, umbrella etc.
thanks!
Song help?
Chemicals React is a good one since you like Ali %26amp; AJ
Reply:Get "That's What You Get" by Paramore, "How I Feel" by Kelly Clarkson and "My Philosophy" by Holiday Parade
Reply:Breakin' dishes-Rihanna
Shut up and drive- Rihanna
Any and everything from Gym class heroes
Fall out Boy
I listen to things like...lipgloss, potential break up, umbrella etc.
thanks!
Song help?
Chemicals React is a good one since you like Ali %26amp; AJ
Reply:Get "That's What You Get" by Paramore, "How I Feel" by Kelly Clarkson and "My Philosophy" by Holiday Parade
Reply:Breakin' dishes-Rihanna
Shut up and drive- Rihanna
Any and everything from Gym class heroes
Fall out Boy
Where are the real lyrics to the song "Potential Break Up Song" by Aly & AJ?
It took too long
It took too long
It took to long for you to call back
And normally I would just forget that
Except for the fact it was my birthday
My stupid birthday
I played along
I played along
I played along it rolled right off my back
Obviously my armor was cracked
What kind of boyfriend would forget that?
Who would forget that?
The type of guy who doesn’t see
What he has until she leaves
Don’t let me go
Cuz without me, you know you’re lost
Wise up now or pay the cost
So you will know
You’re not livin’ till you’re livin’
Livin’ with me
You’re not winnin’ till you’re winnin’
Winnin’ me
You’re not gettin’ till you’re gettin’
Gettin’ to me
You’re not livin’ till you’re livin’
Livin’ for me
This is the potential breakup song
Our album needs just one
Oh baby please
Please tell me
We got along
We got along
We got along until you did that
Now all I want is just my stuff back
Do you get that?
Let me repeat that
I want my stuff back
You can send it in a box
I don’t care just drop it off
I won’t be home
Cuz without me, you know you’re lost
Minus you I’m better off
So you will know
You’re not livin’ till you’re livin’
Livin’ with me
You’re not winnin’ till you’re winnin’
Winnin’ me
You’re not gettin’ till you’re gettin’
Gettin’ to me
You’re not livin’ till you’re livin’
Livin’ for me
You can try, you can try
You know I know it’d be a lie
Without me you’re gonna cry
So you better think clearly, clearly
Before you nearly, nearly
Mess up the situation that your gonna miss dearly, dearly
C’mon
You’re not livin’ till you’re livin’
Livin’ with me
You’re not winnin’ till you’re winnin’
Winnin’ me
You’re not gettin’ till you’re gettin’
Gettin’ to me
You’re not livin’ till you’re livin’
Livin’ for me
This is the potential breakup song
Our album needs just one
Oh baby please
Please tell me
This is the potential break-up song
Just admit you’re wrong
Which will it be?
Which will it be?
Where are the real lyrics to the song "Potential Break Up Song" by Aly %26amp; AJ?
Please do not post a question more then once in such a little time span, especially since the first one was already answered.
It took too long
It took too long
It took to long for you to call back
And normally I would just forget that
Except for the fact it was my birthday
My stupid birthday
I played along
I played along
I played along it rolled right off my back
Obviously my armor was cracked
What kind of boyfriend would forget that?
Who would forget that?
The type of guy who doesn’t see
What he has until she leaves
Don’t let me go
Cuz without me, you know you’re lost
Wise up now or pay the cost
So you will know
You’re not livin’ till you’re livin’
Livin’ with me
You’re not winnin’ till you’re winnin’
Winnin’ me
You’re not gettin’ till you’re gettin’
Gettin’ to me
You’re not livin’ till you’re livin’
Livin’ for me
This is the potential breakup song
Our album needs just one
Oh baby please
Please tell me
We got along
We got along
We got along until you did that
Now all I want is just my stuff back
Do you get that?
Let me repeat that
I want my stuff back
You can send it in a box
I don’t care just drop it off
I won’t be home
Cuz without me, you know you’re lost
Minus you I’m better off
So you will know
You’re not livin’ till you’re livin’
Livin’ with me
You’re not winnin’ till you’re winnin’
Winnin’ me
You’re not gettin’ till you’re gettin’
Gettin’ to me
You’re not livin’ till you’re livin’
Livin’ for me
You can try, you can try
You know I know it’d be a lie
Without me you’re gonna cry
So you better think clearly, clearly
Before you nearly, nearly
Mess up the situation that your gonna miss dearly, dearly
C’mon
You’re not livin’ till you’re livin’
Livin’ with me
You’re not winnin’ till you’re winnin’
Winnin’ me
You’re not gettin’ till you’re gettin’
Gettin’ to me
You’re not livin’ till you’re livin’
Livin’ for me
This is the potential breakup song
Our album needs just one
Oh baby please
Please tell me
This is the potential break-up song
Just admit you’re wrong
Which will it be?
Which will it be?
It took too long
It took to long for you to call back
And normally I would just forget that
Except for the fact it was my birthday
My stupid birthday
I played along
I played along
I played along it rolled right off my back
Obviously my armor was cracked
What kind of boyfriend would forget that?
Who would forget that?
The type of guy who doesn’t see
What he has until she leaves
Don’t let me go
Cuz without me, you know you’re lost
Wise up now or pay the cost
So you will know
You’re not livin’ till you’re livin’
Livin’ with me
You’re not winnin’ till you’re winnin’
Winnin’ me
You’re not gettin’ till you’re gettin’
Gettin’ to me
You’re not livin’ till you’re livin’
Livin’ for me
This is the potential breakup song
Our album needs just one
Oh baby please
Please tell me
We got along
We got along
We got along until you did that
Now all I want is just my stuff back
Do you get that?
Let me repeat that
I want my stuff back
You can send it in a box
I don’t care just drop it off
I won’t be home
Cuz without me, you know you’re lost
Minus you I’m better off
So you will know
You’re not livin’ till you’re livin’
Livin’ with me
You’re not winnin’ till you’re winnin’
Winnin’ me
You’re not gettin’ till you’re gettin’
Gettin’ to me
You’re not livin’ till you’re livin’
Livin’ for me
You can try, you can try
You know I know it’d be a lie
Without me you’re gonna cry
So you better think clearly, clearly
Before you nearly, nearly
Mess up the situation that your gonna miss dearly, dearly
C’mon
You’re not livin’ till you’re livin’
Livin’ with me
You’re not winnin’ till you’re winnin’
Winnin’ me
You’re not gettin’ till you’re gettin’
Gettin’ to me
You’re not livin’ till you’re livin’
Livin’ for me
This is the potential breakup song
Our album needs just one
Oh baby please
Please tell me
This is the potential break-up song
Just admit you’re wrong
Which will it be?
Which will it be?
Where are the real lyrics to the song "Potential Break Up Song" by Aly %26amp; AJ?
Please do not post a question more then once in such a little time span, especially since the first one was already answered.
It took too long
It took too long
It took to long for you to call back
And normally I would just forget that
Except for the fact it was my birthday
My stupid birthday
I played along
I played along
I played along it rolled right off my back
Obviously my armor was cracked
What kind of boyfriend would forget that?
Who would forget that?
The type of guy who doesn’t see
What he has until she leaves
Don’t let me go
Cuz without me, you know you’re lost
Wise up now or pay the cost
So you will know
You’re not livin’ till you’re livin’
Livin’ with me
You’re not winnin’ till you’re winnin’
Winnin’ me
You’re not gettin’ till you’re gettin’
Gettin’ to me
You’re not livin’ till you’re livin’
Livin’ for me
This is the potential breakup song
Our album needs just one
Oh baby please
Please tell me
We got along
We got along
We got along until you did that
Now all I want is just my stuff back
Do you get that?
Let me repeat that
I want my stuff back
You can send it in a box
I don’t care just drop it off
I won’t be home
Cuz without me, you know you’re lost
Minus you I’m better off
So you will know
You’re not livin’ till you’re livin’
Livin’ with me
You’re not winnin’ till you’re winnin’
Winnin’ me
You’re not gettin’ till you’re gettin’
Gettin’ to me
You’re not livin’ till you’re livin’
Livin’ for me
You can try, you can try
You know I know it’d be a lie
Without me you’re gonna cry
So you better think clearly, clearly
Before you nearly, nearly
Mess up the situation that your gonna miss dearly, dearly
C’mon
You’re not livin’ till you’re livin’
Livin’ with me
You’re not winnin’ till you’re winnin’
Winnin’ me
You’re not gettin’ till you’re gettin’
Gettin’ to me
You’re not livin’ till you’re livin’
Livin’ for me
This is the potential breakup song
Our album needs just one
Oh baby please
Please tell me
This is the potential break-up song
Just admit you’re wrong
Which will it be?
Which will it be?
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